Bug Lover

She had more than a hundred thousand miles
But when I saw the “bug,” it gave me smiles
     Bright and red, it had some kinks
     Radio on -- off it blinks
But the engine withstood many more trials

This tiny Volkswagen looked like an elf
I had learned to change her tires by myself
     She chugged hard going uphill
     Just drive slow, she’d make it still
I knew she’d never be placed on a shelf

With tune-ups and oil lubes, she kept going
And never once did she require towing
     She took me from work to school
     Made me feel so very cool
My love for my bug just kept on growing

Time for a new car come graduation
But it never gave me the sensation
     Of being queen of the road
     When it was time to unload
My cousin drove "bug," e’er making her run

Do you remember the movie “Sleeper”
Bug found in cave seemed claimed by the Reaper
     Woody turned the key; it ran
     A centuries-old life span
I ask myself, “Why didn’t I keep her?”

New is nice, but reliable’s better
That tough old bug was quite the go-getter
     It was just one month later
     I was a new car hater
Driving the Camry, I was a fretter

I tried to buy my old Volkswagen back
To convince my cousin, I had no knack
     He loved my bug, laughed at me
     Refused to return the key
When my new Toyota’s engine did crack 



*By Carolyn Devonshire for Carol Brown’s “My First Car” contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/31/2012 6:23:00 PM
printing.....printing......
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Date: 3/31/2012 6:22:00 PM
Newer details to absorb on the second read...I am printing this for my daughter's close friend who also loves her bug!...She gave my daughter a ride in it for half the school year...It's a powerful story put to limerick rhyme!...Classy!
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Date: 3/14/2012 9:36:00 AM
Good morning, Carolyn! I never pictured u as a "BuG" person..more like a camaro girl. ha ha. A great trip down memory lane for u and more insight to one of my favorite all time poets!...Congrats on this win! These are the kind of contests that spur on the best creativity. Don't ya think?...Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 3/13/2012 3:03:00 PM
They were good cars. I learned to drive a shift on an old bug. Congratulations on the win. Mike
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Date: 3/13/2012 1:48:00 PM
Congratulations Carolyn, well done xx
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Date: 3/13/2012 12:39:00 PM
congrats Carolyn on a grand first place win for this spectacular entry.. my oldest son's first set of wheels was a VW..
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Date: 3/13/2012 6:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win and thank you for supporting "My First Car" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/1/2012 12:17:00 PM
LOL, had a good chuckle at this tonight, Carolyn. I always thought the bugs were fun cars : )
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Date: 2/29/2012 10:17:00 PM
by the way, I used to see a bug around town and it had the name RED ROSE. Something like that. It was painted a rosy red with a big rose flower painted on the side of it too. I really loved that car and wished Ihad one like that to drive in town.
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Date: 2/29/2012 10:15:00 PM
oh, crap, you got a cracked engine too. But at least you had that wonderful bug for a while. I really enjoyed this and I think your limerick meter is getting better and better too!
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Date: 2/29/2012 5:14:00 PM
Oh yes, those VW's, so very dependable. Not fancy, reminds me of Jesus. Smile. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/29/2012 1:56:00 PM
A lovely write Carolyn thank you for sharing , Hugs and best wishes , Declan xxx
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Date: 2/29/2012 1:33:00 PM
There are many good writers here on PSoup, and you are one of them Carolyn.Luck to you in the contest, hope you win. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/29/2012 12:58:00 PM
Thank you Carolyn for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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