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"Buddy Breathing" 

Ten leagues below
the bed of the ocean in my heart,
strange creatures exist,
they guard the gate 
of all things that 
have past 

the sound of their existence 
is strange music for strange creatures,
words are not written, nor are they spoken,
mute hearts bleeding and eyes wide open
masks are worn down here, like soft harlequins 
glistening sharp diamonds

they carry forgotten meanings in ever resilient silence,

the trick in the eyes is not to open;

we somehow breathe down here 
it’s called buddy breathing.

we try to think of the poetry
in life, remembering the bliss
in our purposeful being,
the oxygen bubbles God bless,
sometimes rise to the surface;

we like to think we are all friends;

some immortalise us
while we die from the bends.

we prayer for miracles
like the 2nd coming

sweet kisses 
sharks teeth 
colophons

and unblessed
un-nun-like 
sisters


Candide Diderot. ‘25







"Swiftly walk over the western wave,
Spirit of Night!
Out of the misty eastern cave
Where, all the long and lone daylight,
Thou wovest dreams of joy and fear,
Which make thee terrible and dear, —
Swift be thy flight!"
(Percy Bysshe Shelley)


                          ****


"I’m blowing further away
This storm is gaining force
Now it’s tripping the waves
How can I test this water
The stars have their say
I shouldn’t admit this but
My heart starts to stray

I’ve tasted white light
Willows weeping
I’ve tasted love songs
Angels sleeping
Fever's breaking
Wild waves
Leaves are raking

I pray to the Saint of all that’s lost
And in the finding curse uncrossed
Wait for the sun to come undone
Signalling me
Out to sea

I’ve tasted Saturn
Seagulls screaming
I’ve tasted shotguns
Apostles dreaming
Fever's breaking
Wild waves
Legs are shaking


I pray to the Saint of all that’s lost
And in the finding curse uncrossed
Wait for the sun to come undone
Signalling me
Out to sea
Out to sea"
(Elysian Fields, "Out to Sea")

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 3/7/2025 9:49:00 PM
"I’ve tasted Saturn, Seagulls screaming, I’ve tasted shotguns, Apostles dreaming, Fever's breaking, Wild waves ..."
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Date: 3/7/2025 9:49:00 PM
"I’ve tasted white Light, Willows weeping, I’ve tasted love songs, Angels sleeping, Fever's breaking, Wild waves ..."
Date: 3/7/2025 8:55:00 AM
"Out to Sea"/Elysian Fields.
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Candide Diderot
Date: 3/7/2025 9:19:00 PM
LYRICS. "Out to Sea"/Elysian Fields. https://genius.com/Elysian-fields-out-to-sea-lyrics
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Candide Diderot
Date: 3/7/2025 8:55:00 AM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XkvvyhfqWpM&ab_channel=ElysianFields-Topic

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