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.          BUCKET  LIST 
Early dawn I find myself, 
wondering about my health. 
Journey, through the morning mist, 
overwhelmed about the reason I exist. 
Without thinking of my past, 
worried my future will not last. 
All my life I have reminisce, 
at what age to start my BUCKET LIST? 
First, I will work on getting my tickets dismiss. 
Then I will take a trip down to the dentist. 
Call up them guys who got me piss, 
punch them one by one, with my fist. 
I do not wannabe be an old geezer skydiving. 
I want to live my old age surviving. 
I might be brave enough to climb a mountain, 
maybe I will bungee off the Niagara fountain.
Checked out that bump that everyone thinks is a cyst. 
It will be to late, if the army wants me to enlist. 
If I want to travel far,  
on my list I will add a brand new car. 
I will enjoy eating all the fried food, I resist 
even if it brings me closer on DEATH’S LIST. 
Close the door to my demons who at once preexist. 
Before my family thinks, I need another exorcist. 
Thinking how I never did any of the above got me piss.
I will just wait another 35 years to start another BUCKET LIST.

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Date: 2/4/2016 11:22:00 PM
lol **SKAT**
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Date: 6/13/2011 5:03:00 PM
That's an interesting bucket list :D
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Date: 12/5/2010 7:42:00 AM
quite a list you have here. very artful indeed. john h loving iii
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Date: 11/25/2010 8:51:00 AM
i enjoyed reading this. very entertaining. nice write! bless all, autumn.
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Date: 11/21/2010 10:38:00 AM
i like this poem...if you ever make a real bucket list...try o do everything on it...i am 14 and already have half of mine made up...but my bucket list is going to be done with the one im supposed to be with...luv and thanks
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Date: 11/18/2010 11:58:00 AM
Very entertaining poem! I enjoyed reading it. Thanks.
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Date: 11/7/2010 9:42:00 PM
just dropping by to say hi! :D see you around & happy to see you on here even just a bit :D-- hugs nikko :)
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Date: 11/4/2010 6:16:00 PM
Enjoyable! How have you been? Love Matthew A
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Date: 10/30/2010 6:37:00 AM
Naw we should "Just say YES!" and go do it! That's what I did. Said "good bye" to safety (I do have a small net LOL my ex husband still helps a wonderful reliable GOOD man) And I started figuring out exactly what I want to do and DOING IT. No one now to blame if I don't! Thanks for always being a nice supporter PD! Light & Love
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Date: 10/27/2010 10:23:00 PM
THANKS MATE I'M LEARNING SLOWLY THE DIFFERENCES ....COUPLET ETC BUT IM SLOW HEHE did you ever try to sleep... but words did churn instead of sheep so from the bed you slowly creep inscribe the words in the puter keep back to sawing on the old woodheap z z z Don
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Date: 10/24/2010 6:07:00 AM
Hi p.d., enjoyed truely your funny write! Due to my visitors I haven't been much onSoup lately. Thank you for your kind comment on "Magpies". There are penty around here (but I don't have enough jewellery to steal, hahaha!). Have a nice on too!...Gert
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Date: 10/24/2010 4:57:00 AM
Ha! Very funny P.D. Tnx for stopping by me and leaving kind words. Luv, Joy (Jew)
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Date: 10/22/2010 10:22:00 AM
Nice write really loving it --------kelechi
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Date: 10/21/2010 6:08:00 PM
You have some unusual winning rhymes here. I liked it. Then again, I like much of your work. Regards, Gerard
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Date: 10/21/2010 3:09:00 PM
kool$ young bucket list ;b
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Date: 10/21/2010 2:54:00 PM
I gave up my "bucket list" a number of years ago, but you have revived an interest with your demons. I like this poem mucho. Love, Dave
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Date: 10/20/2010 4:09:00 AM
funny stuff...yet profound!
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Date: 10/19/2010 3:04:00 PM
Funny poem, Linda. But what is a "Bucket List". Let me know how you are doing down there. Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/19/2010 6:32:00 AM
Nice poem of your bucket list. Thank's for reading and commenting on my poem.
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Date: 10/19/2010 6:30:00 AM
I think that I will make a Bucket List just to see what I can come up with that I really want to do..I don't know how I had missed this one..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...It is good to have faithful reader that comments on my work for it is encouraging..Sara
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Date: 10/18/2010 5:07:00 PM
lol, p.d. I thought you kicked the bucket long agao. j.k. sweet =(^.^)= Royal
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Date: 10/18/2010 3:29:00 PM
Smells like a bucket of fried chicken to me ! *smiles* What a great writers chance to fill the air with poetic thought ! Awesome ! james
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Date: 10/18/2010 1:43:00 PM
Oh man this was great.I need to start a bucket list HAHA.Thanks for the kind comment.Teresa
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Date: 10/18/2010 12:48:00 PM
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Date: 10/18/2010 12:01:00 PM
a lot of different elements within one subject! i like it!!
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