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Buck Toothed Chuck

Here comes Buck Toothed Chuck from Hickville Street, Sorriest feller you ever did meet. Walkin' his flea bitten dog down the street, Scratchin' his head and flip flopping his feet. If he asks for money best say, "No way"! 'Cuz it'll slip through his fingers in less than a day. He'll be spittin' tobackee the whole day through, 'Cuz he ain't got nothin' better to do. There goes Buck Toothed Chuck from Hickville Street, Hasn't had a bath in over a week, Best steer clear cuz' the smell ain't sweet, Sorriest feller you ever did meet. Written in October, 2014

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 6/9/2016 8:57:00 AM

Hi Laura. Congrats for your placement with this wonderful piece!! ;-)

Michael Tor

Date: 10/20/2015 3:39:00 PM

Nice win Laura congratulations.

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/20/2015 6:45:00 PM

Thank you, Michael, for your kind congrats. I really do appreciate it :)

Neva Romaine

Date: 10/20/2015 9:25:00 AM

Hey Laura, a hearty congratulations on your winning poem! Too funny and great imagery. A well deserved win! Be Blessed, Neva

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/20/2015 6:44:00 PM

Why, thank you very much, Neva! I'm so glad you enjoyed my funny write! It's fun to be goofy, I think :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/19/2015 1:56:00 PM

Big smile here Laura with this delightful poem! Congrats on your win!

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/20/2015 6:43:00 PM

Glad you liked my funny poem, Connie! I like to be goofy sometimes :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/19/2015 5:11:00 AM

Congrats on ur sweet win Laura!

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/20/2015 6:42:00 PM

Thank you, as always, Dr. Upma :)

David Fisher

Date: 10/18/2015 6:25:00 PM

This is a fun one, Laura! If I see him I'll remember to stay out of his way. Way to go on contest.

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/18/2015 7:40:00 PM

Glad you liked it, David! I had fun writing it, too :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/18/2015 3:48:00 PM

Laura, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Stop by my latest blog "Peace Now" if you'd like or have time. WUV ~LINDA~

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/18/2015 7:39:00 PM

Thank you, Linda! I'll stop by your blog and thanks again for the fun contest :)

Old Buck

Date: 5/20/2015 4:17:00 PM

Laura: Thank you for not using my real name and how did you know about my dog. In the past you've called yourself "amateur". Remember: that's a reference term about money, not talent. I have published 2 books and write like an amateur. I'd rather be your kind of amateur than mine. :o) oldbuck

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/20/2015 5:38:00 PM

LOL! I promise I wasn't thinking of you when I wrote this poem!! Thanks for your compliments, Buck :)