Bubba's Club

There once was a fine hacker named Bub
who whacked what he hacked with a wood club
each whack a divot
his hips wouldn't pivot
you should see what he did to the shrubs!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Taylor Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 4:47 PM
Congrats, Deb. Excellent. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
Jones Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 7:01 PM
Congratulations Debbie ...ferry cute....Donna
A   Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 11:07 AM
Congrats D G...pd
A   Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 11:00 AM
Debbie, stopping by to read your winning poem in Craig's golfing limerick. Congratulations with your fun swing ;-) Always & Forever*PD
Esquire Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 11:47 PM
Dear Light and LOVE, Deborah, I Congratulate YOU on a SOUPER'S Super Win in the Contest. Your Humour is Contagious. i can picture looking at the Fairways and saying Bubba's on the 4th one, follow the Divots. Superb Quill. I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 6:00 AM
ha like it congrats Debbie xx
Jerden Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 6:39 PM
Good Limerick, Debbie! Congratulations on the fine win!
Oyewole Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 4:14 PM
Like this limerick of yours... Congrats on your win ~A.O
Roberts Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 2:20 PM
congrats on your win Debbie with this great entry
Kendrick Avatar
April 4, 2013 at 6:33 AM
Well rhymed Limerick..Interesting topic..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
April 3, 2013 at 11:21 PM
soupmail, debs.
Hunter Avatar
April 2, 2013 at 9:15 AM
Also, you are saying that the haiku parts should not be basically what you just read in the prose ... but a different image altogether? Thank you for the help, Debbie. I appreciate it!
Hunter Avatar
April 2, 2013 at 9:13 AM
Great limerick, Debbie...I agree with Andrea. Also, your advice DOES help. I wasn't happy with all the I's either. And I see what you mean about the haiku parts ... the first two lines should be one image and the last separate ... but maybe touching on the first in a metaphorical way ...yes?
Dietrich Avatar
March 31, 2013 at 4:38 PM
hahaha. yours is a truly funny limerick, Debs. I see high marks on this one in the future!
Horne Avatar
March 31, 2013 at 4:34 PM
lol, love it! Happy Easter, Debs x
Macfarlane Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 7:08 PM
Poor whacked out Bub....funny write! Hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 5:54 PM
This is fabulous! A 10 out of 7.
Horsman Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 4:15 PM
Hi Debbie dont get around to much these days, but glad i saw this...
Richards Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 3:04 PM
I can picture those hips !!!! Elvis is playing golf !!! :)
Jones Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 12:20 PM
Very cute Debbie ....Donna
Williams Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 3:07 AM
Debbie I can imagine the mess... have a peaceful time...David
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March 28, 2013 at 9:51 PM
Who says you're not funny! Thank you, message received. It had been my intention. Sad, indeed, sigh. The wounded make a choice, yes? To heal or to recreate the wound in others. I like the paths WE took. xox Dee.
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