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Bubba's Club

There once was a fine hacker named Bub
who whacked what he hacked with a wood club
each whack a divot
his hips wouldn't pivot
you should see what he did to the shrubs!

Copyright © Debbie Guzzi | Year Posted 2013

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Ralph Taylor Date: 4/16/2013 4:47:00 PM Congrats, Deb. Excellent. Nice going. hugs, Ralph Login to Reply

Donna Jones Date: 4/12/2013 7:01:00 PM Congratulations Debbie ...ferry cute....Donna Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/11/2013 11:07:00 AM Congrats D G...pd Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/11/2013 11:00:00 AM Debbie, stopping by to read your winning poem in Craig's golfing limerick. Congratulations with your fun swing ;-) Always & Forever*PD Login to Reply

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Date: 4/10/2013 11:47:00 PM Dear Light and LOVE, Deborah, I Congratulate YOU on a SOUPER'S Super Win in the Contest. Your Humour is Contagious. i can picture looking at the Fairways and saying Bubba's on the 4th one, follow the Divots. Superb Quill. I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 4/10/2013 6:00:00 AM ha like it congrats Debbie xx Login to Reply

Roy Jerden Date: 4/9/2013 6:39:00 PM Good Limerick, Debbie! Congratulations on the fine win! Login to Reply

Abdulhafeez Oyewole Date: 4/9/2013 4:14:00 PM Like this limerick of yours... Congrats on your win ~A.O Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 4/9/2013 2:20:00 PM congrats on your win Debbie with this great entry Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/4/2013 6:33:00 AM Well rhymed Limerick..Interesting topic..Sara Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/3/2013 11:21:00 PM soupmail, debs. Login to Reply

Painted Hunter Date: 4/2/2013 9:15:00 AM Also, you are saying that the haiku parts should not be basically what you just read in the prose ... but a different image altogether? Thank you for the help, Debbie. I appreciate it! Login to Reply

Painted Hunter Date: 4/2/2013 9:13:00 AM Great limerick, Debbie...I agree with Andrea. Also, your advice DOES help. I wasn't happy with all the I's either. And I see what you mean about the haiku parts ... the first two lines should be one image and the last separate ... but maybe touching on the first in a metaphorical way ...yes? Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/31/2013 4:38:00 PM hahaha. yours is a truly funny limerick, Debs. I see high marks on this one in the future! Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 3/31/2013 4:34:00 PM lol, love it! Happy Easter, Debs x Login to Reply

Cecilia Macfarlane Date: 3/29/2013 7:08:00 PM Poor whacked out Bub....funny write! Hugs Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/29/2013 5:54:00 PM This is fabulous! A 10 out of 7. Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 3/29/2013 4:15:00 PM Hi Debbie dont get around to much these days, but glad i saw this... Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 3/29/2013 3:04:00 PM I can picture those hips !!!! Elvis is playing golf !!! :) Login to Reply

Donna Jones Date: 3/29/2013 12:20:00 PM Very cute Debbie ....Donna Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 3/29/2013 3:07:00 AM Debbie I can imagine the mess... have a peaceful time...David Login to Reply

Cyndi Macmillan Date: 3/28/2013 9:51:00 PM Who says you're not funny! Thank you, message received. It had been my intention. Sad, indeed, sigh. The wounded make a choice, yes? To heal or to recreate the wound in others. I like the paths WE took. xox Dee. Login to Reply