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Brush Away

When I first saw you, you smiled directly at me It was a warm, effervescent smile Melted my heart totally But I could also hear you crying, you were crying on the inside I sensed a broken heart still healing, pain lived where love should reside It was mutual magnetism: the more you were attracted to me, the more you tried to pull away I welcomed you into my life with open arms, yet it was a struggle for you Your mind would say, oh no, got to go ... but your heart would say, no way, got to stay It was such a hard struggle for you You didn't trust your new found happiness, it had betrayed you before in the past Dreading always the future, memories told you love never last Our relationship was treading water, it wasn't moving anywhere, it wasn't moving forward So when I told you how I felt, tears started streaming down your cheek You lowered your head and turned away, feeling it was another love lost, love you couldn't keep But I gently turned you around, and brushed away the tears on your face Told you that I loved you so much, that I needed you in my life every day I said let me brush away your tears, let me brush the pain that's been in your heart over the years I said let me brush away your fears, let me brush away all the past hurt that causes you to cry so, so many tears Then you looked up at me, and smiled that most beautiful smile Your expression of love given freely; and the canvas of your heart, you opened to me completely

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/19/2016 5:11:00 PM
WoW! Freddie, you've penned such a beautiful love story.The character in this write was so loving, caring and patience. He showed her how much he loved her by loving her through her brokenness. His steadfast and unwavering love made her believe. This is my kind of poem. Well done. A without a doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/19/2016 1:35:00 PM
Such a tender and heart touching poem Freddie. It is often hard to step into the waters of a new relationship after a broken heart but when it is true, it doesn't take long to figure it out and accept what is being offered. Nicely done my friend.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 12/19/2016 3:17:00 PM
Yep. Right on all points, Chris. Ty for the gracious comments. Love and joy to you.

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