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Bruised Ego

I lusted after Deborah from my first day at school. As did every other boy, her looks made them all drool. On Valentines I sent a card despite my inhibition. She responded with a churlish smile that set me on a mission, I asked her for a date and she replied “well, that depends… …in fact, on second thoughts, I’d rather we were Just Friends”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/24/2013 7:36:00 AM
Awwww, shame. I hope you managed to score with some other Deborah in the end. Nice poem, David. :)
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David Sollis
Date: 4/24/2013 7:39:00 AM
Not a deborah - i bagged a Julie ;-)
Date: 4/24/2013 5:55:00 AM
Nice poem.
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