Bruised Ego

I lusted after Deborah from my first day at school.                 
As did every other boy, her looks made them all drool.
On Valentines I sent a card despite my inhibition.
She responded with a churlish smile that set me on a mission,
I asked her for a date and she replied “well, that depends…
…in fact, on second thoughts, I’d rather we were Just Friends”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Hendricks Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 7:36 AM
Awwww, shame. I hope you managed to score with some other Deborah in the end. Nice poem, David. :)
Sollis Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 7:39 AM
Not a deborah - i bagged a Julie ;-)
Horstkotter Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 5:55 AM
Nice poem.
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