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BRRR - Rhyme B Radiant sunlight shines through twinkling new snowflakes Rainbows of ice peek out in a rhapsody of reflections Ripples of color reborn now rejoice like crystal keepsakes 11-10-20 Contest: Kim’s Acrostic Play Sponsor: Kim Rodrigues Collins Dictionary, Oxford Dictionary and Your Dictionary.com all list “Brrr” as a word accompanied by a definition.

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Date: 11/26/2020 1:30:00 AM
Loved your choice of word, and your ice cold poem. "Peek out in a rhapsody of reflections". Going now to put my p-p-parka on. Congrats!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/2/2020 12:27:00 PM
TTTTank you my fffreezing ffffriend! Hope you have thawed out by now! This was so much fffun to write! Your messages always warm my heart - pretty cccold in the dugout! Think I'll fffollow your signal and head for the closet to fffind my coat, scarf and mmmittens! Bbbblessings!
Date: 11/25/2020 2:38:00 PM
Congratulations, Sam, on your Brilliant placement!!
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Date: 11/25/2020 2:37:00 PM
Congratulations, Sam, on your Brilliant placement!!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/2/2020 12:14:00 PM
Thank you so much Newton for your return visit with congratulations! So appreciate them! Warm wishes!
Date: 11/25/2020 7:16:00 AM
Hi Sam, Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a Happy Thanksgiving:-) Alexis
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/2/2020 12:28:00 PM
Hi Alexis! So appreciative and thankful for your congratulations. Thanksgiving was good. Hope you had a wonderful day! Sending you blessings and warm wishes!
Date: 11/25/2020 6:52:00 AM
Love this and the use of the word Brrr! Congrats on first place, Sam!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/2/2020 12:20:00 PM
This was just plain fun Kim! Thank you for your message of congratulations, your gracious placement and for sponsoring such a whimsical and wonderful contest. As you can tell, I love writing acrostics. My fifth grade teacher introduced me to this poetic form. Sending you "warm" wishes for a wonderful Christmas season.
Date: 11/15/2020 10:32:00 AM
Clever Sam, and pretty cool!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/2/2020 12:16:00 PM
Hi LJ! So good to find your message. Warmed by your visit and very "cool" message. Sending you the blessings of the season!
Date: 11/13/2020 7:47:00 AM
I shiver with the beauty of your words dear Sam, I am honored that you made the effort to re enter a comment after it disappeared, lol, it means so much to me, Thank you for being so graceful, have a blessed day dear poet.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/2/2020 12:12:00 PM
Greeting PD! Thank you for your wonderful message. I enjoy our visits! For me it is an honor to encourage the gifts and talents of the very gifted writers here on the soup. So glad you received my reply. Hope you have warmed up with a cup of coffee, tea or soup! Blessings to you dear poet!
Date: 11/12/2020 12:06:00 PM
Sure, a BRRILIANT rain of rainbow images, Sam!!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/2/2020 12:06:00 PM
Hi Newton! So enjoyed your creative and clever message. Thank you. Enjoy your visits. Warm wishes to you!
Date: 11/12/2020 11:52:00 AM
BRRRRRILLIANT!:-) hugs jan xxx
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/2/2020 12:05:00 PM
Thank you my brrright and lovely friend! Stay warm and cozy. hugs....
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John Watt
Date: 11/25/2020 10:56:00 PM
Very clever, Jan!
Date: 11/12/2020 9:25:00 AM
Your poems have a unique style to them Sam and all of them that I have read are thoughtfully and creatively composed and crafted. This acrostic is wonderful , well penned my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer,
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/2/2020 12:02:00 PM
Thank you so very much my friend! Writing every day, reading the wonderful words of poets here on the soup and writing for the contests has really helped me, and challenged me, to craft a style. I so appreciate your gracious message. It encourages me. So glad you like the acrostic. It was fun. Sending you bright blessings of this wonderful season my friend. Hugs and blessings to you!
Date: 11/11/2020 10:15:00 AM
Oh, Sam.. my lovely friend.. though this isn't a rhyme, your radiant poem is sublime with imagery divine! "Rainbows of ice peek out in a rhapsody of reflections" - so beautiful! This piece has metaphors and alliteration to delight my heart's imagination! Your gifted mind and creative pen executed this acrostic-with-a-twist with stunning success and finesse. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes to you, my dear poetess.. Susan
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/2/2020 12:41:00 PM
Dear friend, thank you for your "best" and "warmest wishes." Your words are inspiration to my pen. They are companions on this poetic journey and send me off with a blend of inspiration and motivation as I wend my way through this poetic world where we tend the gifts of words arm in arm with my friend! Many blessings dear poetess.
Date: 11/11/2020 10:05:00 AM
Sam, your rhyme acrostic is lovely, best of luck _Constance
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/2/2020 11:57:00 AM
Thank you so much Constance. Was fun to find a word then craft lines to match the mood! Hope you are well. Sending warm wishes. Hope you are not experiencing the "brrr" of a Canadian winter. Blessings and hugs!
Date: 11/11/2020 5:06:00 AM
WOW and double wow. This is a incredible poem that I so love. You did a marvelous job with this theme. God bless you with a win and Have a beautiful Thanksgiving
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/2/2020 11:54:00 AM
Hi Gina! This was such a fun contest. I love writing acrostics. My fifth grad teacher taught me how to write an acrostic. Thank you for your gracious words. So glad you loved it and so appreciative of your good wishes! Means a whole lot! Sending you bright wishes of this incredible season of hope dear friend!
Date: 11/10/2020 4:08:00 PM
Yes, "Brrr" is a good example of onomotopoeia (misspelled, sorry). Love all the descriptions associated with the "R" letter. Best wishes for a win, Sam! Hugs, Carolyn
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/2/2020 11:50:00 AM
Can you tell I am way behind in responding to messages! Thank you for your lovely and gracious message. I so enjoy your emails. Grateful for all of your positive wishes! Hope you had a great holiday. Sending you blessings of this Christmas season.
Date: 11/10/2020 2:59:00 PM
Hi Sam, Stunning imagery in your well written write. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day;-) Alexis
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Date: 11/10/2020 11:35:00 AM
Sam, this is so beautiful and descriptive--love the simile! Janice
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/2/2020 11:46:00 AM
Thank you Janice. This was such a fun and interesting form of the acrostic. Hope you are well. All the best!
Date: 11/10/2020 11:19:00 AM
brrrilliant coruscating write :)
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John Watt
Date: 11/25/2020 10:57:00 PM
Clever, Susan!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/10/2020 11:27:00 AM
Thank you Susan. Your visit definitely brrrightened my day! All the bbbest to you!

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