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Brownie's broken beak

Brownie broke her beak today Purloining potted prawns Despite Will’s whistled warning words To only eat from lawns But Brownie boldly battered that toughened tin top jar and broke her lovely beak in bits she’d pushed her peck too far but wily Will he had a way to triumph testing trial so searching for some Superglue he produced a plastic phial But Brownie fussed and fluttered And Thang a tuneleth thong Worried when Will wrapped it up thseed thing her thong all wong One dinky drop of adhesive Fast fastening he found Forever fixed his flailing foot But stopped that thsquawking thound

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/11/2012 4:32:00 AM
Oh, I am quite a newcomer to Poetry Soup, but I have obviously discovered a poet whose work I really love. I see you won a competition David. Congratulations! I have only ever once entered a competition, ha ha.
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Date: 5/16/2011 11:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's contest David. Love,Carol
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Date: 5/14/2011 9:45:00 AM
This says it all. Congrats on your win. I like the last verse. That super glue can be dangerous. In Christ's Love gf
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Date: 5/12/2011 3:03:00 PM
This was a very well written poem and deserved the win. I love that 4th verse
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Date: 5/11/2011 3:57:00 PM
Great verse on the sparrows curse and all fixed with a spot of glue the aussies often used wire kept T model fords a driving too very good poetry mate Don
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Date: 5/11/2011 1:59:00 PM
Congratulations..Sara
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Date: 5/11/2011 7:33:00 AM
So charming!! What a sweet and clever poem...a winner!! Congratulations!!
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Date: 5/11/2011 5:36:00 AM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, David
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Date: 5/11/2011 5:19:00 AM
hahaha What a hilarious story rhyme, David. Had me chuckling all the way until full blown laughing by the end ! Excellent way to start my day. I think only reason you got first place was that there is no position higher! Loved it . Congratulations, David.
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Date: 5/10/2011 9:59:00 PM
Fabulous win, many congrats to you x
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Date: 5/10/2011 9:00:00 PM
Oh My..I missed this first time around..its just the funniest...what a great job and congrats on your BIG win. BG
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Date: 5/10/2011 8:15:00 PM
Congrats David on your first place win in Francine's contest with this wonderful write on the photo luv.. enjoy your top spot for a top notch poem..
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Date: 5/10/2011 7:53:00 PM
Now THAT's hysterically funny and extremely creative. Congrats on your well-deserved first place win. What a great contest Francine had. Bravo for you! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 5/10/2011 7:52:00 PM
Very imaginative. Good job and congrats.
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Date: 5/10/2011 7:41:00 PM
Love the speech impediment of this broken-beaked bird. Great phonetics in this one! This is my first time reading your work..hope it won't be the last. Awesome win! Gwendolen
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Date: 5/10/2011 7:33:00 PM
congrats on your first place win in my contest David, I just love it
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Date: 5/4/2011 8:35:00 AM
I love this. What an awesome start to my day.
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Date: 5/4/2011 7:58:00 AM
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