Margaret Franceschini Poet Dramatic Verse

Brown- Your Eyes

Brown – Your Eyes

Dark and rich
As nature 
Color of the trees and soil
A hue of luminous browns
A blend of shadows in the sky 
The color of your eyes

Gazing brings me deeper 
As I descend into colors so rustic
Shades of taupe fading at dusk
Taking me deeper into your sight
Like twilight 

Chocolate coffee 
Galloping horses from Renaissance
Embroidered in a spectrum 
A gallery of browns
Cover me like a gown

The colors of the earth
As in the chestnut tree
Where we sit 
Your eyes find me 
I surrender
To the splendor
Of your eyes

 Margaret Franceschini (March 17, 2014)

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Lucilla Carrillo April 6, 2014 at 11:29 AM Another beautiful poem. A very creative write. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Robin Davis March 24, 2014 at 8:51 AM Margaret What a splendid and creative write. You took a "bland" color and turned it into some great things. Thanks for the wonderful comment on my Friendship poem. Welcome to The Soup.

Keith O.J. Hunt March 23, 2014 at 6:52 PM Great expression and color Enjoyed it Margaret!

Johnny Rhinem March 19, 2014 at 12:38 PM Man Girl! This Is True Blue Poetry And One Can Only Imagine, Their Splendours Betwixt These Loving Eyes Such, Beauty ~ My Love, Always & Forever, John ... Ps., Thank You, Beautiful Margaret For Your Kind Visit And, 'SoupMail!'

Tim Ryerson March 18, 2014 at 4:29 AM WOW, You are a VERY talented poet Margaret...You have taken the color brown and turned it into an elegant and compelling piece of work...Welcome to Poetry Soup - Tim

Robert Pettit March 17, 2014 at 7:10 PM What can brown do for you? A fascinatingly good write.

Paul Callus March 17, 2014 at 3:55 PM Awesome; glad I visited. :) // paul