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FAVORITE THINGS Poetry Contest, a Seguidilla
Nette Onclaud
8/16/2025

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While getting the noonday sack,
This storyline goes.
A handpuppet gets too much — 
Girl eats with mouth closed,
Then a thermos drops.
In someone's lap, fingertips
Better her heartthrobs.

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Date: 8/18/2025 4:11:00 PM
lovely poetry, food luck for the contest
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Date: 8/18/2025 1:24:00 AM
A well written poem which deserves high placing.
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Date: 8/17/2025 2:39:00 AM
A verse of lively spirit, Paige. In the quiet joy of layered thoughts, I discover a world of meaning, each veil a whisper of the unseen. Always devious and uplifting. Good luck with the contest,
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Date: 8/16/2025 6:02:00 PM
just clever and uplifting. Best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sar a
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