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Brown Midas

He felt so cocksure his Midas Touch was proctor. Vegas pulled him down. Now his Midas touch is brown. His failure was a shocker. NB: Inspired by, but not entered in, Edward Ibeh’s This of That, Vol 15 Contest

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Date: 1/25/2023 12:15:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page with congratulations. I appreciate the time spent there. Sara
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/25/2023 1:09:00 PM
Thank you Sara. You are always welcome here. I read as much as I can. jugs :)
Date: 1/25/2023 8:02:00 AM
Nice one, Linda, Italian says about speed, "What's behind you is not in front of you!", yeah right until it catches up with you, Aloha William
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/25/2023 1:09:00 PM
LOL. So true William, so true. My brother used to say "Never look behind, they may be gaining on you." Stay well. Aloha Linda :)
Date: 1/23/2023 3:34:00 PM
You should have entered it Linda, its really good , and very funny. Cheers Wen
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/23/2023 4:19:00 PM
Hi Wen! I'm not sure why I didn't enter. I wrote it way ahead of the deadline, then forgot about it. LOL Thanks for the comments friend! :)
Date: 1/23/2023 10:36:00 AM
"Now his Midas touch is broken" a sad line.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/23/2023 10:49:00 AM
Yes, well, it happens. Thanks for the visit and comment Miranda. :)
Date: 1/23/2023 9:17:00 AM
Ah Midas, so greedy. Everything he touched is gold and remained hungry.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/23/2023 10:49:00 AM
Hello Victor - yes, he was :)

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