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Heartbreaker

When they met, sparks flew Deep down we just knew Love without question Instant combustion Match made in heaven Lucky star seven They looked so happy Truly meant to be Thought it was magic Never did so click It was sheer delight Smiles ever so bright Joy radiated They looked elated Then he never called We were all appalled Never understood Nobody e’er could Cruel bitter ointment His fear of commitment AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted for contest ANY COUPLET WRITTEN IN OCTOBER-NOVEMBER 2017 sponsored by LAURA LOO - November 28, 2017

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Date: 11/29/2017 4:34:00 PM
what a sweet poem that turns by the end, loved this one. It's funny, i love my partner but am absolutely terrified of remarrying again. great writing
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Date: 11/29/2017 6:40:00 PM
O Lewis, I'm kinda sorry you resonate with this poem... but thanks... you might want to work on that... ;-)

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