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Brother Mine

Brother Mine The pain so graven Man betraying man Emotions fly to intercept And save a failing heart Not important, not essential Try; try to push the knowing down to places not visited. To forgive? To overlook, to salvage.. Essential for survival. But not forgotten.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 4/6/2024 12:08:00 PM
Beautifully written
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Date: 11/20/2008 10:10:00 AM
Touching piece, and very relevant...Raul
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Date: 11/20/2008 9:51:00 AM
Barbara - This poem really hits me hard this morning - For the sake of our site I have let it go - But never will he have anything to do with me again - Michael Torres is nothing like what he claims to be - He has used and abused one of the most beautiful people I have ever met - She is a walking angel on this earth - Thats the end of what I have to say other than I apologize for all that has happened - God Bless you hon and may you have a beautiful day, MJ
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Date: 11/20/2008 9:26:00 AM
Wonderful write Barbara! I get this and I have lived this emotion. Great stuff.
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Date: 11/19/2008 11:14:00 PM
Excellent write, Barbara. I can feel the internal battle and love the final development of forgive but not forget. Great stuff. Love, Nigel
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