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Poetry/Free Verse/Brooding Nimbus
Copyright Protected, ID 06-1557-330-23
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written June 23, 2023
For the International contest, Pick-A-Title, Vol. 37
sponsor, Edward Ibeh, Judged 07/22/2023

First Place

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I have an aura of a purple ambience. . . a woebegone . . . forlorn essence and perfume my painful past is a heavy dark cloak I am subdued and solitary memories haunt my days and nights my brooding nimbus is who I am and I accept this cloud of sadness that is me it surrounds me like a vapor like a vampire who thirsts for blood I thirst for my grief and for all those I loved so I never forget what love is and that I was truly loved by many once upon a time sometimes the vapor of sadness that surrounds me is like a hued purple gauzy cloud quite beautiful others have seen it and remarked and I have seen it too you may think me a lonely and unhappy girl but I am not really though admit I am quite moody I tend to brood, and ponder too much getting hurt easily is my history but it is the incense of my character I thirst for silence like a need oh, without this brooding feeling could I write . . . poetry for to write . . . I must reach deep into the darkness deep into my soul . . . for the words

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/1/2023 12:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Constance! You have taken us on your personal journey into "brooding" grief and your poetic journey. Blessings to you.

Constance La France
Date: 8/1/2023 1:21:00 PM

Sam, thank you so much for the comment, and congratulations, blessings

Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/22/2023 9:46:00 AM

Big Congrats to win TOP on your wonderful poem. Love.

Constance La France
Date: 7/22/2023 10:04:00 AM

Anisha, thank you so much for the congrats and compliment, love !

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 7/22/2023 9:28:00 AM

An absolutely outstanding write, Constance! Powerful and compelling. Warmest congratulations on your win

Constance La France
Date: 7/22/2023 10:03:00 AM

Seeker, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations !

Edward Ibeh

Date: 7/22/2023 6:02:00 AM

Powerful and harrowing! Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this spectacular poem, Constance:-) I loved it!

Constance La France
Date: 7/22/2023 10:02:00 AM

Edward, thank you so much for the contest and my wonderful placement, and for the compliment and congratulations !

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/22/2023 5:51:00 AM

A very vivid painting of fluent feeling arising from the deep down of the heart. Congratulations!

Constance La France
Date: 7/22/2023 10:01:00 AM

Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations !

Jay Narain

Date: 6/25/2023 11:29:00 AM

Speechless I am with your emotions. Very creative way of using brooding nimbus concept. You are always a winne,

Constance La France
Date: 6/26/2023 8:17:00 AM

Jay, thank you so much for the compliment and comment !

Robert James Liguori

Date: 6/25/2023 4:14:00 AM

Your history has shaped you into the beautiful poet that you are. God gifted us with your ability to create beautiful and touching poetry. Please keep the words flowing…

Constance La France
Date: 6/26/2023 8:17:00 AM

Robert, thank you so much for the nice comment and compliment on my writing !

Valsa George

Date: 6/24/2023 9:19:00 PM

Wonderful and very emotive. You have approached the subject fronm an altogether different angle. May be your sorrows help you in composing such heart rending poems. All the best dear Constance!

Constance La France
Date: 6/26/2023 8:18:00 AM

Valsa, thank you so much for the compliment, nice comment, and encouragement !

Stephan McBride

Date: 6/23/2023 6:32:00 PM

Wow, must be something to see an aura surrounding you, I do not see you as an loney and unhappy girl, but amazed by your gift in creativity, writing, just being yourself which is where we can find true self and peace. : ). Thank you for sharing your amazing gift with us all, : )

Constance La France
Date: 6/26/2023 8:19:00 AM

Stephan, thank you so much for the comment, though I wear my grief, I am fine, it is part of who I am, and thanks for the compliment !