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Poetry/Free Verse/Brooding Nimbus
Copyright Protected, ID 06-1557-330-23
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written June 23, 2023
For the International contest, Pick-A-Title, Vol. 37
sponsor, Edward Ibeh, Judged 07/22/2023

First Place 

 

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Brooding Nimbus

I have an aura of a purple ambience. . . 
           a woebegone . . . forlorn essence and perfume 
        my painful past is a heavy dark cloak
     I am subdued and solitary
             memories haunt
my days and nights

          my brooding nimbus is who I am and
I accept this cloud of sadness that is me
        it surrounds me like a vapor 

      like a vampire who thirsts for blood
        I thirst for my grief and for all those I loved
so I never forget what love is
and that I was truly loved by many once
            upon a time

sometimes the vapor of sadness that surrounds me
          is like a hued purple gauzy cloud quite beautiful 
others have seen it and remarked and I have seen it too 

you may think me a lonely and unhappy girl
        but I am not really though admit I am quite moody
          I tend to brood, and ponder too much
      getting hurt easily is my history
        but it is the incense of my character
                   I thirst for silence like a need
    oh, without this brooding feeling could I write . . .  poetry
for to write . . .  I must reach deep into the darkness
              deep into my soul . . .  for the words
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Kauffman Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 12:29 PM
Congratulations on your win Constance! You have taken us on your personal journey into "brooding" grief and your poetic journey. Blessings to you.
La France Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 1:21 PM
Sam, thank you so much for the comment, and congratulations, blessings
Dutta Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 9:46 AM
Big Congrats to win TOP on your wonderful poem. Love.
La France Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 10:04 AM
Anisha, thank you so much for the congrats and compliment, love !
Seeker Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 9:28 AM
An absolutely outstanding write, Constance! Powerful and compelling. Warmest congratulations on your win
La France Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 10:03 AM
Seeker, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations !
Ibeh Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 6:02 AM
Powerful and harrowing! Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this spectacular poem, Constance:-) I loved it!
La France Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 10:02 AM
Edward, thank you so much for the contest and my wonderful placement, and for the compliment and congratulations !
Alex Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 5:51 AM
A very vivid painting of fluent feeling arising from the deep down of the heart. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 10:01 AM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations !
Liguori Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 4:14 AM
Your history has shaped you into the beautiful poet that you are. God gifted us with your ability to create beautiful and touching poetry. Please keep the words flowing…
La France Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 8:17 AM
Robert, thank you so much for the nice comment and compliment on my writing !
George Avatar
June 24, 2023 at 9:19 PM
Wonderful and very emotive. You have approached the subject fronm an altogether different angle. May be your sorrows help you in composing such heart rending poems. All the best dear Constance!
La France Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 8:18 AM
Valsa, thank you so much for the compliment, nice comment, and encouragement !
McBride  Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 6:32 PM
Wow, must be something to see an aura surrounding you, I do not see you as an loney and unhappy girl, but amazed by your gift in creativity, writing, just being yourself which is where we can find true self and peace. : ). Thank you for sharing your amazing gift with us all, : )
La France Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 8:19 AM
Stephan, thank you so much for the comment, though I wear my grief, I am fine, it is part of who I am, and thanks for the compliment !
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