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Premiere Contest WinnerBronze Oceans

My schooner eases
into the tiger claw
that an umber peninsula
juts seaward.
The carnelian bay 
beckons like honey
as I aim
for twilight's tangerine
and sun's waning citrine
in amber haze.
Papaya clouds whipped
by solar winds
breathe the siren lure
of bronze oceans
in the scriptural future
to my restless golden heart.

6/30/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ravidas Avatar
June 1, 2019 at 10:27 AM
I'd like to say smth but everything have been said down there. I'd better enjoy reading through it again)
Cozart Avatar
June 1, 2019 at 10:29 AM
Thanks, Kurt!
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 6:00 PM
revisiting this gorgeous one!
Dietrich Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 5:05 PM
Your writing is so amazing. I wish I could do free verse like you do. I could win more of Brian's contests!! Congrats on a well deserved win.
Cozart Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 6:29 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
Gentry Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 4:26 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win!
Cozart Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 4:30 PM
Thank you, Susan.
La France Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 1:30 PM
Dale, congratulations on first place in Brian's contest, well done !
Cozart Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 2:01 PM
Thanks, Constance.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 10:38 AM
Love this line: Papaya clouds whipped by solar winds. Congrats on top win!
Cozart Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 10:56 AM
Thanks, Kim, good to hear from you!
Roper Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 9:16 AM
Love all the sunlight colors :-) great imigary.. congratulations on your win hugs Eve
Cozart Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 9:30 AM
Thanks very much, Eve.
Waters Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 12:10 AM
gorgeous color feast -great winner
Cozart Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 7:53 AM
Thanks much, Virginia.
Dutta Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 12:03 AM
Big Congrats to Golden Heart.
Gauthier Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 9:57 PM
Back with most deserved congrats on your gold medal win, Dale.
Cozart Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 7:53 AM
Thank you, Line.
Wolf Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 9:12 PM
A gold medallion for a poem perfectly penned about--- bronze, ironically! Olympian wishes, Dale, ~ Gershon
Cozart Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 7:53 AM
Thanks, Gershon.
Haight Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 8:11 PM
Such a beautiful 'painting' you create with your poetic words, Dale! Congratulations on your well-deserved Trophy win! Sandra
Cozart Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 8:46 PM
Thank you very much, Sandra.
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July 5, 2018 at 7:14 PM
Love the colorful poem, Dale, and especially the "restless golden heart". Big congrats on your win!
Cozart Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 7:43 PM
Thanks, Agnes!
Ashley Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 5:01 PM
Returning happily with congratulations, Dale, for your excellent trophy win with your exquisite poem. Well deserved! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Cozart Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 5:30 PM
Thanks so much, Susan.
Ashley Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 10:27 PM
Oh such a breathtaking poem, Dale, with luscious imagery steeped in striking color and stunning beauty. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Cozart Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 7:40 AM
Thanks so much, Susan.
Smith Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 6:40 PM
Wow Dale amazing
Cozart Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 6:48 PM
Thanks very much, Tim.
Gauthier Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 5:46 PM
Delectable to the senses, Dale. A FAVE for me.
Cozart Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 6:48 PM
Gosh, Line, Thanks!
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 5:42 PM
Hello Dale I love this poem. I felt I was with you in this scene. Well done. Have a nice evening my friend.
Cozart Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 6:48 PM
Thanks so much, Darlene.
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