Bronze Oceans Premiere Contest Winner

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My schooner eases
into the tiger claw
that an umber peninsula
juts seaward.
The carnelian bay 
beckons like honey
as I aim
for twilight's tangerine
and sun's waning citrine
in amber haze.
Papaya clouds whipped
by solar winds
breathe the siren lure
of bronze oceans
in the scriptural future
to my restless golden heart.

6/30/2018

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Date: 6/1/2019 10:27:00 AM
I'd like to say smth but everything have been said down there. I'd better enjoy reading through it again)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/1/2019 10:29:00 AM
Thanks, Kurt!
Date: 1/10/2019 6:00:00 PM
revisiting this gorgeous one!
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Date: 7/8/2018 5:05:00 PM
Your writing is so amazing. I wish I could do free verse like you do. I could win more of Brian's contests!! Congrats on a well deserved win.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/8/2018 6:29:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
Date: 7/7/2018 4:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/7/2018 4:30:00 PM
Thank you, Susan.
Date: 7/6/2018 1:30:00 PM
Dale, congratulations on first place in Brian's contest, well done !
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/6/2018 2:01:00 PM
Thanks, Constance.
Date: 7/6/2018 10:38:00 AM
Love this line: Papaya clouds whipped by solar winds. Congrats on top win!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/6/2018 10:56:00 AM
Thanks, Kim, good to hear from you!
Date: 7/6/2018 9:16:00 AM
Love all the sunlight colors :-) great imigary.. congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/6/2018 9:30:00 AM
Thanks very much, Eve.
Date: 7/6/2018 12:10:00 AM
gorgeous color feast -great winner
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/6/2018 7:53:00 AM
Thanks much, Virginia.
Date: 7/6/2018 12:03:00 AM
Big Congrats to Golden Heart.
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Date: 7/5/2018 9:57:00 PM
Back with most deserved congrats on your gold medal win, Dale.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/6/2018 7:53:00 AM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 7/5/2018 9:12:00 PM
A gold medallion for a poem perfectly penned about--- bronze, ironically! Olympian wishes, Dale, ~ Gershon
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/6/2018 7:53:00 AM
Thanks, Gershon.
Date: 7/5/2018 8:11:00 PM
Such a beautiful 'painting' you create with your poetic words, Dale! Congratulations on your well-deserved Trophy win! Sandra
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/5/2018 8:46:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sandra.
Date: 7/5/2018 7:14:00 PM
Love the colorful poem, Dale, and especially the "restless golden heart". Big congrats on your win!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/5/2018 7:43:00 PM
Thanks, Agnes!
Date: 7/5/2018 5:01:00 PM
Returning happily with congratulations, Dale, for your excellent trophy win with your exquisite poem. Well deserved! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/5/2018 5:30:00 PM
Thanks so much, Susan.
Date: 6/30/2018 10:27:00 PM
Oh such a breathtaking poem, Dale, with luscious imagery steeped in striking color and stunning beauty. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/1/2018 7:40:00 AM
Thanks so much, Susan.
Date: 6/30/2018 6:40:00 PM
Wow Dale amazing
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/30/2018 6:48:00 PM
Thanks very much, Tim.
Date: 6/30/2018 5:46:00 PM
Delectable to the senses, Dale. A FAVE for me.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/30/2018 6:48:00 PM
Gosh, Line, Thanks!
Date: 6/30/2018 5:42:00 PM
Hello Dale I love this poem. I felt I was with you in this scene. Well done. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/30/2018 6:48:00 PM
Thanks so much, Darlene.
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