Bronte Inspiration Part Three - Collaboration By 'Jadazzle'

TO FULLY UNDERSTAND THIS POEM PLEASE READ BRONTE INSPIRATION PARTS 1 AND 2 FIRST 


Our marriage has now been consummated
I’m so glad that you were patient and waited
Our passions for each other burns so strong
To find you my love, I have waited so long
Now I have discovered that I am with child
When I told you the news you smiled and smiled
It is a symbol of our true love
You truly were sent to me from heaven above

Discovering you has been such a joy
Unwrapping the layers like an excited school boy
You are an incredible lover but it is more than passion we share
With every beat of my heart, I feel you are there
So heavenly has been the news that you gave
Tears of happiness flow wave upon wave
Soon another baby will reside in Bronte country
What a wonderful mother you are going to be.
 
The time for my confinement is drawing near
My husband will be with me – I have nothing to fear
Finally the day arrives for the baby to be born
I hope he will be delivered before the break of dawn
Tenderly holding my hand you say you will always be there
Birth is an incredibly emotional act for two lovers to share
He mops my fevered brow and says he will always be mine
Finally the babe arrives – he looks like his father he’s so divine

Your husband gives thanks to god for I have been truly blessed
With a wonderful wife and a beautiful son at your breast.
I hold you close as our baby sleeps
Every day brings a new memory to keep
To love you forever must be my aim 
With much love we choose our first child's name
So many suggestions but we would rather
Name him Patrick after the Bronte's father.

28th April 2014
Written by JaDazzle – Jan Allison & Darren Watson

~Please see my blog posted today about 'JaDazzle' ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 4/29/2014 3:02:00 PM
A lovely collaboration!
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/29/2014 3:04:00 PM
Thanks Ken I have found my true poetry soul mate working with Darren - our third in the Bronte series - hardly a word got changed. Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/28/2014 6:47:00 PM
The saga continues.....I am hooked Jan...reminds me of my days watching All My Children in college...started watching to get closer to the girls but after watching for a week I was hooked...lol
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/29/2014 12:38:00 AM
Thanks Tim. Darren's work commitments are restricting his writing but we are still collaborating when time allows... watch this space. Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 4/28/2014 4:26:00 PM
OH YOU TWO! :) Love happy endings...and a child that is the fruit of your love is the perfect gift! Thank you both for the Bronte journey. My romantic heart is satisfied. Hugs
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/28/2014 4:36:00 PM
Hi Eileen - I have just posted a blog to let the soup world know we are still writing together - I am SO pleased you were the first one to comment on this. You know you are the inspiration behind JaDazzle and for that we are both so grateful. Another poem is under construction when time allows. Hugs my dear friend. Jan xxxxxxx
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