Bronte Inspiration Collaboration By Jan Allison and Darren Watson

We walk across meadow and moor 
Along tracks where horse and carriage once rode 
Treading paths where the poets of yore 
In search of inspiration once strode. 
Lilac and sage scented hedgerow 
Old stone wall needs repair 
The Bronte's oft walked this furrow 
That now with my best friend I share

Side by side in the sunshine we stroll
Even in silence we still keep up our stride
Stopping by the riverside for a drink and a roll
No prejudice in what we say, we still maintain our pride
Enjoying each other’s company for hour upon hour
Coyly smiling you gently take my arm
Stooping down you pick me a delicate flower
Secure in your company; I can’t come to any harm 

Arm in arm we retrace the steps of Agnes Grey 
We are enveloped in the spirit of Jane Eyre 
Heathcliff and Catherine come out to play 
We sense both their joy and despair. 
In the plush settings of the hotel we dine 
Becoming the tenants of Wildfell Hall 
Great company, good food and a glass of wine 
We are guests at the Bronte Ball.

We become Jane and Mr Rochester that night
Dancing together in demure and graceful style
You look so handsome in the flickering candlelight
Your arm round my waist, it lingers a while
Climbing the stairs to our adjoining rooms
You look at me longingly; there is no haste
Do we become lovers, or is it too soon
Like a Bronte heroine I remain chaste

Eileen Ghali has been kind enough to create a BLOG about our collaboration poem, please drop by and read it.You can access it via the HOME page



Collaboration Poem By Darren Watson & Jan Allison
9th April 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Shiells Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 5:44 PM
Jan, This is a wonderful and unique collaboration with you and Darren. I'm speechless. It is elegant and perfect my friend, Great read~ Thanks very much for sharing this with us here. Thanks for stopping by as well and leaving the kind thoughtful comments that you do. Love and Peace, Deborah
Allison Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 5:48 PM
Deborah If you go on to 'jadazzle united' you can read all our collaboration poems - you will see what fun we have and the total harmony we write in - barely a word or a line gets changed in any of our poems - pure magic to work with Darren :-) I am so lucky to have him in my life. jan xxx
Nganga Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 7:27 AM
Wow!!!!!I guess part two answers the question!!! am intrigued!!!
Allison Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 9:41 AM
Hi Penina. Darren and i started our collaborative writing after a contest on here. Just seem to have a connection and the poems are flowing. Thanks for dropping by hugs Jan x
Brewer Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 4:36 AM
Bravo, well done to you both,you have written such a charming and romantic poem together,you've done a fabulous job,such a delight to read,looking forward to the next installment..,,, much love and big hugs to you my friend. xx
Allison Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 6:12 AM
Had such fun with it Jenny. Darren is fantastic to work with and we have several more poems on the go together. - Remember my friend this is all because of YOU. Hugs Jan xxx
Torres Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 1:52 PM
Fabulous!!!! but i'm a bit quenching for a next episode,,,, this is an awesome collaboration w/ the best poet here in PS.. Congratulations!!! ...this is a winner already in my eyes... :o))
Allison Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 2:00 PM
Think Darren wanted a bit of 'bedroom action' but are saving that for our current collaboration. I have suggested we do a part 2 to this one thought. We haven't entered this for the collaboration competition - check out 'Our first meeting in the Isle of Man' -which we wrote first and have entered it in Jared's contest - that is a bit naughty (blushes)
Macfarlane Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 10:38 AM
Romantic and beautiful! Love the flow. Excellent job Jan and Darren. Hugs
Allison Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 10:59 AM
Thanks Cecilia had a fabulous time writing it, am so glad you enjoyed it Hugs. Jan
Duggan Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 12:32 AM
Well Jan you knew I would like that one didn't you and boy were you right, I loved it, you both have done such a brilliant job with this and now when I watch the Bronte movies (Which I might add I have seen before) I will definitely think of you, really enjoyed...............Vera...............
Allison Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 3:42 AM
Yes I do think this one would appeal to the ladies Vera! Have to admit Pride and prejudice with colin firth I could watch from start to end! Thanks for the lovely comments Jan xxx
Frankel Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 7:52 AM
very atmospheric, nice one guys! best wishes, Alex
Allison Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 7:56 AM
Thanks Alex. Hugs Jan xxxx
Walker  Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 12:39 AM
Beautiful collaboration Jan. I like the romantic vigor. Hope you all continue this romanticism. Verlena
Allison Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 12:43 AM
We had such fun writing this Verlena I am so proud of this poem with Darren - our next one is in production! Hugs Jan xxx
Ellison Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 5:11 PM
WOW! You and Darren have a special bond, dear sis! You guys are AWESOME!!! Please write some more you two... loving hugs, Brother Jack XOXOX
Allison Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 5:21 PM
Thanks for the lovely comments Jack. I have Jared Pickett to thank for the friendship that has evolved with both you and Darren - the collaboration idea is superb - the ideas flow and I am loving it. Never fear dear brother Jack a new poem is in the making and its steammmmyyyyyyy. hugs Jan xxxx
Callus Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 2:59 PM
Hi Jan. This Bronte Inspiration is an awesome write. I read Bronte when I was much younger and that was a pleasure indeed. Darren and you did such a good job that I would find it hard to try and separate these verses into Yours & His :) Also followed the conversation that went on under this post...most interesting and jolly. Keep up the good work. // paul
Allison Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 3:11 PM
Thanks for the lovely comments Paul - its amazing the rapport Darren and I have developed since our Isle of Man Collaboration poem - yet again the verses just flow so naturally, We are currently on our next collaboration. Hugs Jan xxxx
Watson Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 2:10 PM
Thank you Jan , I enjoyed every minute.
Manassian Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 2:23 PM
If you don't mind...I'm blogging on this. I want EVERYONE to read...and if you mind...too late...SUE ME! Give the blog a read. Hugs
Allison Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 2:19 PM
Well got to say its a bit of a change of style from the Isle of Man first meeting poem, but long may the soup mail continue to flow Hugs Jan x
Manassian Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 2:14 PM
Will look for more of your signature writes....Come up with a name....Richard Lamoureux has written some with Shadow..and their name is SHADOWLAM productions.... ;) I will definitely be one of your supporting and adoring fans.....This did come off as seamless and effortless...the signature of GREAT WRITING! ;) Hugs...You've lifted my spirit!
Manassian Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 2:12 PM
Well, with collaboration like this....you two should never part. WRITE WRITE WRITE more!!! Goodness gracious me!! I'm flying high....Yes, Darren...I can imagine that Jan wants to be CHASED....good play on words! The thing is....after she's been chased...will she be chaste...still? ;)
Manassian Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 1:49 PM
SUPERB...SUPERB...SUPERB...I LOVE THE CLASSICS...I've watched Jane Eyre umpteen times....PRIDE AND PREJUDICE as well...the BBC versions are the best...OH DEAR ME!!! My favorite line here is this: No prejudice in what we say, we still maintain our pride! What genius is this? WOW, you two! Please check my Heathcliff Kind of Love poem. I make mention of Jane, Rochester, Catherine and the rest of the crew. You guys rock!!! "My cherished preserver, GOOD NIGHT..." No one does those lines like Dalton!
Allison Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 2:30 PM
Oh Eileen Blog Bog away - the phoenix is rising from the ashes wahoooooooooooooooo Hugs Jan xxx
Manassian Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 2:16 PM
THE BRONTE THEME.......ROCKS! Darren...good choice. I love the classics....Nothing can hold a candle to them.......NOTHING! Pride and Prejudice...Sense and Sensibility...OH OH OH...I've written one on that too, but...you'll hate me....I took my own take on that....SCENT and SENSUALITY! HA HA! Oh well....One must try to bring SOME silliness into it....
Allison Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 2:08 PM
Oh Mr Watson - please spare my blushes and save that line for the next one lol Jan x
Allison Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 2:06 PM
Darren deserves all the credit for the Bronte theme - he comes up with the first verse of our collaborations and I continue with the second - there was little or no rewriting of verses we are in harmony when we write - I feel very privileged to write with him he's a very special friend. Jan x
Watson Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 2:05 PM
Don't believe a word of it Eileen , She wants to be chased not chaste, lol
Allison Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 1:59 PM
Well Eileen, to be honest I think Darren would have preferred a bit of 'bedroom action' but it didn't seem appropriate .. but our next one is in production as we type so watch this space! LOL Have got to say i could watch the Colin Firth version non stop - am probably word perfect now as its often on sky lol. Have had awful afternoon and between you and Darren I have a big grin now. Hugs Jan x
Manassian Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 1:51 PM
To remain chaster or not....THAT is the question! You demure one, you! ;) Hugs
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