Brokenhearted Sunsets

When does an outcome thoroughly blossom
through snow falls and brokenhearted sunsets?
Life provides inspiration of awesome
born adventures to sing with no regrets.

Hope, faith, love nonstop of acknowledgement 
great seductive beauty and temptation; 
recall religious impoverishment 
always fearing committed relation.

God step back , applaud His created world,
an endless space unfurl a breathtaking 
beauty nature's hands as energy whorled. 
No fractured mirrored surface myth-making.

In the brightest bright of the heaven stars;
brokenhearted sunsets are waning scars.


1-24-2018

Poetry Contest:'Best Sonnet' 
Sponsored By: 	Laura Loo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Barden Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 11:01 PM
All the best and big congrats on your wonderful win in Joseph's contest, Eve - blessings as always, my friend! :-)
Gauthier Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 3:23 PM
Congrats on your fine win, Eve.
Leiser Avatar
January 27, 2018 at 6:59 PM
So beautiful and touching, Eve! Loved this sonnet of yours :)
Onclaud Avatar
January 27, 2018 at 4:40 PM
tenderly capturing a hopeful essance... lovely work, eve.. huggs
Williams Avatar
January 27, 2018 at 5:05 AM
I love this emotional Sonnet of yours Eve, especially the concluding last two lines. Good luck in the contest my friend....Maria xxx
One Avatar
January 26, 2018 at 5:12 PM
so many great lines in this poem Eve.. I love that first stanza..
Andresen Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 3:10 PM
- Beautiful poem with emotion, dear Eve (B-D, girl:) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Horsman Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 2:55 PM
I too, loved this wonderful rendering of yours Eve. love the imagery.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 9:06 AM
I enjoyed the poem and all the tremendous comments from your admirers.
Wigley Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 2:08 AM
Beautifully done, and I love the uplifting conclusion. Well done, Eve. Viv x
Dietrich Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 11:26 PM
I agree with the others. The final couplet is so profound! I like the essence of this topic that you captured. This is the one that drew my attention as well. If I do it, I'll probably take the romance route!!!
Tripp Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 9:51 PM
Wow! Have to agree with Susan on this one. That last couplet blew me away. Nicely done!
Ashley Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 7:53 PM
Oh Eve, your final couplet is lovely in emotional imagery. A beautiful and expressive poem. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan
Michael Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 7:33 PM
Even a heartbreak will be healed... Beautifully expressed...All the best Eve
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