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Brokenhearted Sunsets

When does an outcome thoroughly blossom through snow falls and brokenhearted sunsets? Life provides inspiration of awesome born adventures to sing with no regrets. Hope, faith, love nonstop of acknowledgement great seductive beauty and temptation; recall religious impoverishment always fearing committed relation. God step back , applaud His created world, an endless space unfurl a breathtaking beauty nature's hands as energy whorled. No fractured mirrored surface myth-making. In the brightest bright of the heaven stars; brokenhearted sunsets are waning scars. 1-24-2018 Poetry Contest:'Best Sonnet' Sponsored By: Laura Loo

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Date: 2/15/2018 11:01:00 PM
All the best and big congrats on your wonderful win in Joseph's contest, Eve - blessings as always, my friend! :-)
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Date: 2/12/2018 3:23:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win, Eve.
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Date: 1/27/2018 6:59:00 PM
So beautiful and touching, Eve! Loved this sonnet of yours :)
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Date: 1/27/2018 4:40:00 PM
tenderly capturing a hopeful essance... lovely work, eve.. huggs
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Date: 1/27/2018 5:05:00 AM
I love this emotional Sonnet of yours Eve, especially the concluding last two lines. Good luck in the contest my friend....Maria xxx
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Date: 1/26/2018 5:12:00 PM
so many great lines in this poem Eve.. I love that first stanza..
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Date: 1/25/2018 3:10:00 PM
- Beautiful poem with emotion, dear Eve (B-D, girl:) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/25/2018 2:55:00 PM
I too, loved this wonderful rendering of yours Eve. love the imagery.
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Date: 1/25/2018 9:06:00 AM
I enjoyed the poem and all the tremendous comments from your admirers.
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Date: 1/25/2018 2:08:00 AM
Beautifully done, and I love the uplifting conclusion. Well done, Eve. Viv x
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Date: 1/24/2018 11:26:00 PM
I agree with the others. The final couplet is so profound! I like the essence of this topic that you captured. This is the one that drew my attention as well. If I do it, I'll probably take the romance route!!!
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Date: 1/24/2018 9:51:00 PM
Wow! Have to agree with Susan on this one. That last couplet blew me away. Nicely done!
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Date: 1/24/2018 7:53:00 PM
Oh Eve, your final couplet is lovely in emotional imagery. A beautiful and expressive poem. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan
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Date: 1/24/2018 7:33:00 PM
Even a heartbreak will be healed... Beautifully expressed...All the best Eve
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