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Brokenhearted Sunsets

The love you lost will not scrub away time Nor disguise a tear stained face curled in dark You doubt brighter suns will once again climb Your misery's sadness turns oligarch Sovereign hearts judge their own choice of pain And weigh distressed scales of fleeting love lost Extent of emotions spent to sustain Grow rotten and die to love at all cost Tomorrow fills with torture you provoke And is fraught with blurred mind's eye that remains This pained remembrance you'll evoke Will discharge to leave darker deeper stains You curse the sunsets you count and lament Brokenhearted sunsets are your torment 1/24/18 contest One in Five #4

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Date: 2/15/2018 11:02:00 PM
All the best and big congrats on your wonderful win in Joseph's contest, Frederic - blessings as always, my friend! :-)
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Date: 2/12/2018 3:21:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win, Frederic.
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Date: 2/7/2018 9:16:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Frederic :)
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Date: 1/25/2018 2:06:00 AM
A fine piece, Frederic, packs a real angry puch. Will do well, I'm sure. Regards, Viv
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Date: 1/24/2018 11:29:00 PM
As always, you came up with a sophisticated sonnet, Frederic. You need to do a book of sonnets!!
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Date: 1/24/2018 11:28:00 PM
funny what you said about tyburn. I feel that way too. Let me see what you wrote here now. It seems a lot of poets are drawn to that same theme of Joseph's as I am.
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Date: 1/24/2018 7:09:00 PM
Sounds like Hell to me. Beautifully composed.
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Date: 1/24/2018 10:41:00 AM
A sonnet full of sadness Frederic.. I like the rhymes in this one..
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