Brokenhearted Sunsets

Death has released your soul upon this sad eve, and there is nothing that I can do but grieve. As a dying sun sets. A trickle of tears has morphed into a flood, and my heart shrivels, as though drained of its blood. As painful as it gets. And the fabric of my life starts to unweave, confronting a truth I don't want to believe. As chills turn into sweats. I have not come to grips with the pain I feel, clinging to the belief your death isn't real. Life has no safety nets. Slipping into dreams that you frequently haunt, I can cuddle with you as long as I want. My dreams hold no regrets. Without you, a scarlet sunset seems mundane, Nature's spectacle has been reduced to plain. Brokenhearted sunsets.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 12:04 PM
Beautiful, Emile. Well penned.
Pinet Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 9:10 AM
Thanks Line, Your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 3:55 PM
Emile, this poem is expressed so beautifully in its plaintive sorrow. I have never written in this form, but it seems to be a bit challenging. Best wishes for the contest! : )
Pinet Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 10:45 AM
Thanks Connie, I appreciate your unwavering support my friend, Emile.
Hamilton Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 10:23 AM
Wonderful Roundel Emile, such a pleasure to read, although sad, is kind of lyrical with repeating phrases, I enjoy that!
Pinet Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 10:31 AM
Thank you so much John, your comments are like a warm hug my friend, Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 8:04 AM
So sad, Emile! GL in contest!
Pinet Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 10:17 AM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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