Broken-Hearted I Search

What happened to us my sweetheart,
Where are the days of sweet love gone,
How did so much change so fast,
Why did our morning end before dawn?

Where there was once a beautiful garden
Only dandelions now grow so high,
And in place of the vibrant butterflies
A lonely sparrow silently flies.

I remember how your face gleamed
Blessed with the joy of adorable twins,
Soon after something drove you insane
When you took our kids for a short spin.

Did you go to park, or the ice cream shop?
Don't just sit there, please talk to me,
How did they disappear on your watch?
Where are our twins, where are my babies?

I can't sleep anymore, I hear their cry,
They need my love, they ache for my hug,
It's been so long since I sang a lullaby,
I want to hold tight, hold them so snug!

They are just babies, they didn't abscond,
I feel them near, but don't hear the hearts,
I read them stories but they don't respond,
No one can find them, I'm falling apart.

I can't help them, when I hear their sigh,
I'm reaching out, I won't surrender,
As I yearn for their smile and miss their joy,
You keep telling me you don't remember.

Just tell me sweetheart, did you kill our babies?
Did you just dump them without a goodbye?
Drowned in my grief, your silence is killing me,
Why don't you search, why don't you cry?

First Place
October 13, 2017
Broken-Hearted
Sponsor: Broken Wings
Note: Fiction-- Based on a true story in Maryland. A mother is charged for murder.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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George Avatar
July 19, 2023 at 6:23 AM
So heart rending is this cry of the father! This story has evoked deep feelings of pain in me. The husband here despite his deep grief doesn't use any harsh word against his wife, may be because she is affected by post partam depression.
Kauffman Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 9:30 PM
How vividly you captured this father's grief! A hearbreaking call for truth, Vijay, so well written. Congratulations on your win
Roper Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 9:15 PM
Great write ,Vijay, for Linda's contest. Congratulations on your win.
Dietrich Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 5:46 PM
It was likely post partum depression. IN other cases it's out of pure evil that such acts occur. You did very well capturing the sad heart break of this situation. A belated congrats. This is a poem of yours I had not seen yet.
Haight Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 8:46 AM
Vijay, such a well-written poem that images such a heartbreaking story. I was glad to read it wasn't your story. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win. Sandra
Barden Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 10:18 PM
Best wishes and big congrats on your well-earned win, Vijay - keep up the great poetry, my friend! :-)
La France Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 1:20 PM
Vijay, congratulations on your first place in my contest. You truly penned a heart-broken write, I cannot imagine how awful this would be !
Pandit Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 2:45 PM
Thank you BW--appreciate your comments!
Pett Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 12:29 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Vijay, this would be the worst thing if this happened to me, devastating, well written.
Pandit Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 12:41 PM
Thank you Roy!
Schiavina Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 9:41 AM
Congratulations Vijay! Well deserved win with excellent sad poem.
Pandit Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 10:58 AM
Thank you Frances!
Y. Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 4:51 PM
This is a heartbreaking story. I hate to hear it’s based on true events. Congratulations on your 1st place win in the "Broken Hearted Poem contest " - Alexis
Pandit Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 10:58 AM
Thank you Alexis!
Roper Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 4:29 PM
:) back to congratulate you on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
Pandit Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 10:58 AM
Thank you Eve!
Dietrich Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 6:06 PM
Oh my goodness, we hear stories like this and it is very sad how a parent can do this kind of thing. Great title for your sad poem, Vijay.
Pandit Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 6:50 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
Onclaud Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 2:57 PM
heart-wrenching and so vividly expressed with touches of gentle pleas... i can't imagine a mother doing this!.. greeat job...huggs
Pandit Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 5:00 PM
Thank you nette!
Roper Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 12:08 PM
heartfelt poem, Vijay, luck in the contest.if I remember the woman was mentally disturbed. Was a very sad time Hugs Eve ~`*
Pandit Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 2:14 PM
Thank you Eve!
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October 14, 2017 at 7:49 AM
EXCELLENT piece, so heart-wrenching, Vijay! Janice
Pandit Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 2:14 PM
Thank you Janice!
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October 14, 2017 at 2:18 AM
This is such a sad and depressing write my friend, but so eloquently well written! I surely loved the way you wrote, "Drowned in my grief, you silence is killing me," just like the silence of the babies being gone, it would drive me insane, I would become a zombie and search forever for them, but in my heart they would always reside! I really enjoyed reading your incredible write this morning! What a stunning poem, Great Work!!
Pandit Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 2:13 PM
Thank you Russell!
Ashley Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 9:48 PM
Such a heart-breaking poem Vijay that is excellently expressed. Awesome write. Good luck in the contest!
Pandit Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 2:11 PM
Thank you Susan!
Teagan Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 9:05 PM
This is heartbreaking :( There is too much sorrow in this world. You wrote this well.
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October 14, 2017 at 2:11 PM
Thank you Becca!
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