Brokenheart

..................   L  I                                  L  O
                Y            F                       Y             V                         
           M         H        E                M        G           E                
       F   O   R   E  V  E  R             E   T   E   R  N    A   L                    
     L     E    N    O    R    E          L     E    N    O    R     E
  E   N   T   W   I   N   E   D       E   N   T   W   I  N   E   D
 Always  with  my HearT  I         Always with true Feeling
Love You, my Dearest WIFE        ALWAYS with Emotions
My  Love grows like an oak        My  Heart beats for YOU
Mighty  and E v e r l a s t I n g       MY  TEARS  are  Real 
 YOU  are  M Y  STRENGTH         Yet My Heart still Aches
  FOR YOU LIVE in  ME            Though You live with GOD
   ETERNAL  B L I S S        YOU wear the gown of Angels
     INFINITE  P U R E        YOU carry my Heart in Yours
       You grow in my heart     EACH  and   EVERY   Day 
         The LOVE grows and   I am at  Peace KNOWING
            As  LOVE  Grows          In my  BROKEN Heart 
              Constantly Knitting        cracks and Fissures
                My  Dearest Beloved    Tenderly  Mended
                    Repairing Loneliness   My Wife Lenore
                       Angelically Smiles   Eternally Loved
                          MY Only Most        B E L O V E D
                              L  I  F  E        L  E  N  O  R  E
                                  Always      F O R E V E R
                                      YOU    My  Heartbeat
                                          Are   My   S O U L
                                              MY      W I F E
                                                One  Breath
                                                    N e v e r
                                                      Alone
                                                      YOU
                                                       And
                                                          I
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Squyres Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 3:57 PM
Wow !!! Love this shape poem...it is just so sweet !!!
Stella Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 8:13 AM
Congrats dear friend on this utmost spectular shaped poem hope you print this out and place it on a plaque simply beautiful as it's writer keep up the wonderful work miss ya
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October 15, 2010 at 11:44 AM
DANIEL, Congratulations! On having your poem featured this week. A poem well deserved, keep the fascinating poetry coming" Nathan D."
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October 15, 2010 at 9:45 AM
GOOD MORNING! DANIEL, CoNGRATULATIoNS ON HAVING YOUR POEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT"
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October 13, 2010 at 1:30 PM
HGarvey, hello & Congratulations! On your awesome & well done poem being featured this week: ) have a nice one,..p.d. "
Dominick Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 6:54 AM
Amazing & beautiful! Thank you for sharing this heartfelt write! >>All the best, Karen
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
October 12, 2010 at 5:11 PM
Congrats on this highly creative piece being featured. Vince
Roberts Avatar
October 11, 2010 at 11:18 AM
congrats on having this fantastically put together piece featured this week, its truly beautiful
Brown Avatar
October 11, 2010 at 5:59 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week HG what a great way to have it seen. Love, Carol
Gorelick Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 7:11 PM
Your "other sweetheart" says well done..once again..BG
Sweetheart Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 3:26 PM
Congrats HG my silent be3au on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all .. your forever "Sweetheart" luv..
Fisher Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 12:00 PM
Many congrats on your lovely poem being featured this week. Rgds Janette
Gorelick Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 2:06 PM
Whew..what an intricate piece of poetry/art. Congrats my dear on your win in the contest. BG
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May 24, 2010 at 1:32 PM
Again, beautiful comes to mind when I see this again. Takes talent to have 3 poems work together like this. Congratulations on your win in Amy's contest. Enjoy your success! Karen
Green Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 12:39 PM
great poem and cleverly presented. I think this was my 1st one sent in, fell in love with it from the start. Congrats on your win!
Sweetheart Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 12:39 PM
But such a beautiful broken heart from a beautiful ADAM ..HG ..congrats on your winning 6th place with this unique design and poem... as always my silent beau... u are the best... enjoy your victory ..with luv from the forever .."Sweetheart"
Bono Avatar
April 18, 2010 at 8:38 PM
This is fantastic.I like it.I posted lyrics to a song called Temporary Home.If you get a chance take a look.Hope all is well.
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April 14, 2010 at 12:07 PM
Beautiful! So creative. I hear you are home from the hospital. Have a speedy recovery. Karen
Brown Avatar
April 14, 2010 at 11:00 AM
Amazing HG my forever friend. Love, Carol
Chircop Avatar
April 5, 2010 at 5:27 AM
How beautiful,what a creation of words,love. .lovely,If we all could find this type of love,you and your beauty shared,the love which is eternal,Charma
La France Avatar
April 4, 2010 at 6:55 PM
This is amazing, it must have taken you hours to create this beautiful and creative piece, I think it is wonderful... now, for my contest, your assignment is.. morals.... love Constance
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April 2, 2010 at 4:51 PM
you never fail to speak of your passion when writing of Lenore. forever may you be with her. i love you always spirit brother.oh! i heard about the hospital in Barbara's & so, may you rest peacefully, so that loving heart of yours will stay passionate & healthy.(: -Always&Forever your sister spirit Lynn
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April 1, 2010 at 9:16 PM
Tender, heartbreaking words that fit the "shape" of your poem very nicely, HG. I hope you have a blessed Easter! Love, Carolyn
Gorelick Avatar
April 1, 2010 at 8:28 PM
Yes, You and Lenore.
Sweetheart Avatar
April 1, 2010 at 8:22 PM
FABULOUS HG .. breathtaking write.. luv forever.. SOUP MAIL... luv.. "Sweetheart"
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