Broken Wings

A newborn butterfly just broke out of her cocoon shell.
She spread her orange and black wings
and attempted her first flight.
She not only flew, she soared through the heavens.
The sunlight gave her warmth that she had never known before.

Little did she know, that this feeling would not last.
This monarch would cross paths with an uncaring, ravenous bird.
It grasped the butterfly in it's claws,
and with the bird's hungry beak, it tore the precious wings from the monarch.
A bird doesn't care who it hurts,
as long as it satisfies them.

The butterfly was delirious, from the pain and the shock.
Her beautiful wings were taken away.
She could no longer fly amongst the warm sunlight.
She now only knows the despair and the darkness that she used to be.
Now that monarch has become a caterpillar.
And, death has become her cocoon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Rodrigues Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 4:02 PM
Such a sad life! Unfortunately these things do happen :(
Chamberlain Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 1:10 AM
I really enjoyed your poem, beautifully penned. The last two lines are fantastic. :-)
Dom Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 8:15 PM
Congratulations on your first place win.
Dom Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 8:14 PM
The reality of nature is a wild flavour that our domestic palate does not always appreciate.
Deschler Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 5:23 PM
This kind of thing is a harsh reality of nature that needs to be understood and excepted, instead of just ignored. Thank you for stopping by, Michael. I appreciate it very much! :)
A. Sharma Avatar
April 17, 2014 at 1:20 AM
Kelly a beautiful depict of the nature's real ways of life ! Congrats on topmost winning poem !
Deschler Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 3:10 PM
Thank you very much for stopping by, Dr. Upma! :)
Guzzi Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 7:02 PM
A interesting and unique 'take' on nature! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Deschler Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 3:11 PM
Thank you so much for the kind comments, Debbie! :)
Rodgers Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 6:21 PM
Congrats on your win. An entomological note, Monarchs are generally avoided by birds as they taste terrible because of the Milkweed plant the larvae feed upon exclusively. There is a mimic species (Viceroy) which does not taste so bad but birds avoid because they imitate Monarchs. There are mathematical models of the relative % of each species maximizes survival of both. this Monarchs passing may benefit the species as the bird may well avoid them in the future. May be a poem here.
Deschler Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 2:21 PM
That is interesting, I did not know that, Dave. You are right, there may be a poem there!...Thank you so much for stopping by. I do appreciate it! :)
Stephens Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 12:55 PM
Hi Kelly, Congrats on your win. Expressive and well told story. All the best. Theresa xx
Deschler Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 7:36 PM
Hi Theresa, Thank you very much for stopping by to read my poem. I really appreciate it! :)
Johnson Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 11:47 AM
Nature can be cruel and you tell it so well. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Deschler Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 7:26 PM
Mother Nature can be as cruel, as she is beautiful, I agree...Thank you so much for your kind words, Joyce. :)
May Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 11:02 AM
Very poignant ending ..congrats on the win
Deschler Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 7:18 PM
Thank you very much, Joseph. :)
Mehta Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 9:38 AM
Happy to see you on the winner's list. Congrats, kelly
Deschler Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 7:11 PM
Thank you very much, Dr. Ram. It really felt good when I saw my name at the top of the list. :)
Callus Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 9:20 AM
Beautiful poem Kelly. Reminds me of the many young people who are abused of by predators in real life. // congrats on fine win. // paul
Deschler Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 12:51 AM
This poem was meant to be a metaphor, and you are one of the few who has picked up on that. Thank you very much for stopping by, Paul. I do appreciate it! :)
Nance Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 7:57 AM
tragic and well spoken. grats on your win. well done ;)
Deschler Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 12:31 AM
Thank you very much, Casarah! :)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 6:00 AM
congratulations on your first place win obviously pd has made a mistake in numbering her positions nobody would be rude to place top place as 2nd , well done
Deschler Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 12:27 AM
Thank you so much, Mandy. Your kind words really meant a lot to me! I'm not upset that my poem was given a 2nd place. It still made it to the top of the list, and that was a great feeling! :)
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April 16, 2014 at 1:58 AM
Hello Kelly, nice to see you on my winning list again. :)... Big hugs, and smiles... always & Forever ~LINDA
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Allison Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 1:10 AM
fantastic poem a well deserved winner. Hugs Jan x
Deschler Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 2:36 PM
Thank you so much, Jan. I do appreciate your kind comments. Hugs :)
Davis Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 10:17 PM
Kelly Such a happy and sad poem all at the same time. This takes the reader on a journey with the butterfly from being born, living and dying. Nice job Thanks for the wonderful comment on my Door Mat poem. Your welcome for all the comments back.
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September 19, 2013 at 4:10 AM
Big congrats on your second place win Kelly that's a well deserved win!!!
A  Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 2:21 PM
Love your super win Kelly, ............ luv ~SKAT~
Duncan Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 10:57 AM
nicely written, the line of order in nature. Broken Wings is also a song by Mr. Mister, you can listen/ watch on utube ;}
Hamilton Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 1:57 PM
nature can be so cruel congrats on win Shadow x smile
Anglesey Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 7:42 AM
Congratulations on the win :) I felt the harsh suffering of the delicate butterfly...great last line
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 10:55 AM
Congratulations on your winning place Kelly xx
A   Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 8:50 AM
Hi Kelly,, stopping by with hugs & smiles:-) xox (-: CONGRATULATIONS :) on your win. Enjoy my blog "You know where my heart is" when you have time. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15906&PoetID=18720 ---Always & Forever xox-Linda-xox
Mehta Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 8:36 AM
Congrats on your poem winning in the contest, Kelly
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