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Broken Wind Chime

Broken Wind Chime The broken wind chime played one note at a time In the soft, blowing, evening breeze Still, it’s tune was relaxing and pretty A reminder, to slow down, to pace yourself - It ends with a beautiful result - A song emerges like anything you create Not rushed, just easy; free flowing, genuine, creativity Resting, listening, observing, all coming together - Topped with a smile - Heidi Sands 3/28/25 (C)opyright

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Mike Bayles

Date: 3/30/2025 12:34:00 PM

Such a joyful poem.

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/31/2025 5:28:00 AM

Thank you Mike :)

Reya Suri

Date: 3/29/2025 7:55:00 PM

Aww, I love this message! I interpreted it as how you can shine and be beautiful, as long as you do what you do! It doesn't need to be perfect, but if you're consistent, you'll get somewhere! A broken wind chime will chime, even if one at a time. keep writing, I loved this a lot actually!! :3

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/30/2025 5:37:00 AM

Thank you Reya I am happy you loved this. I appreciate your kind feedback :)

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 3/29/2025 2:14:00 PM

One note at a time can still sound pretty> Lovely write, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/30/2025 5:37:00 AM

Yes, it can. Thank you Suzanne :)