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Broken To Brokenness

Life has changed so am I For good reasons I am moving Accepting with open arms what life gave No complaints ever kept in heart But…but I do as well breathe a life Have some expectations to strive. Be happy and best of health ever If ever I denied things sometime I also breathe and wish to survive. Lone and far taken from my roots Family never interfered for OUR good Don’t I deserve the same from your end My expectations always seems wrong Silence of me and my family nicely torned. The truth I put forward is just a pain No resolution as to why I go insane Taken and broken and not to complain Yet struggling without giving up May be I too am wrong at places But is it I am totally iniquitous My peace going to pieces Not visible … just your pain No right to mention else you be in strain But what about me... Haven’t I sacrificed all without a word Or being a girl, all my responsibility We two cant live the way we wish It always have to be your family. I am broken tired of explaining I am not a criminal or sinful species Still fill my part with best of ways Anyhow proceed with smile all days Just wish for myself too to get back Broken is not an easy feeling infact It never gives just takes away all No happiness sought if I cry and haul I will try anyways to be normal But...I am broken hope it does matters Why I feel so hope you find it sensible Its after all about two if us Which will matter most till we live Hope you realize it all before too late And its not easy to call the self Broken… Broken… Broken …

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/27/2012 12:26:00 AM
congratulations on ur win .its a beautiful write .
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Date: 10/25/2012 5:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem winning in ~SKAT~'s "Brokenness" contest Sneha. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/25/2012 1:13:00 AM
CONGRATS SNEHA ON WINNING AN HM FOR THIS STUNNING WRITE LUV ..
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Date: 10/22/2012 11:58:00 AM
A touching and very well written poem, lots of feelings that you describe well. - Wishing you all the best in future. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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