Broken Picker

A broken picker...
           
           has history of ignoring flashing red flags

                   when picking significant others  


April 11, 2018

boyfriendcharacterconfusiongirlfriendrelationshipepigram

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Michelle Faulkner

April 16, 2018 at 9:53 AM

Little bit of twist ending, I didn't think of "broken picker" as a person but as an object - have a good day-

Susan Gentry

April 16, 2018 at 2:13 PM

Thanks Michelle. Appreciate your comment.

Gershon Wolf

April 15, 2018 at 9:33 PM

Such an ingenious turn of phrase, "broken picker!" it works really, really well in this epigram. I want to pinch its cheek, so to speak. Uncommon common sense wisdom here too, to boot. :) Gershon

Susan Gentry

April 16, 2018 at 2:07 PM

Thank you! I like that... uncommon common sense. Fits. Appreciate your input always.