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A broken picker...
           
           has history of ignoring flashing red flags

                   when picking significant others  


April 11, 2018

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Date: 4/16/2018 9:53:00 AM
Little bit of twist ending, I didn't think of "broken picker" as a person but as an object - have a good day-
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Susan Gentry
Date: 4/16/2018 2:13:00 PM
Thanks Michelle. Appreciate your comment.
Date: 4/15/2018 9:33:00 PM
Such an ingenious turn of phrase, "broken picker!" it works really, really well in this epigram. I want to pinch its cheek, so to speak. Uncommon common sense wisdom here too, to boot. :) Gershon
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Susan Gentry
Date: 4/16/2018 2:07:00 PM
Thank you! I like that... uncommon common sense. Fits. Appreciate your input always.
Date: 4/14/2018 6:06:00 PM
so true and so well expressed!! Time for folks to quit fiddling around with bad PICKS!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 4/15/2018 7:59:00 AM
Thanks Andrea. Lol you're so right!
Date: 4/11/2018 1:26:00 PM
I guess some folks carry a lot of emotional baggage so it can be a tough ask Susan:-( hugs Jan xx
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Susan Gentry
Date: 4/11/2018 3:31:00 PM
So true. Mine was broke for a long long time.