Broken Picker

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A broken picker... has history of ignoring flashing red flags when picking significant others April 11, 2018

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/16/2018 9:53:00 AM

Little bit of twist ending, I didn't think of "broken picker" as a person but as an object - have a good day-

Susan Gentry
Date: 4/16/2018 2:13:00 PM

Thanks Michelle. Appreciate your comment.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/15/2018 9:33:00 PM

Such an ingenious turn of phrase, "broken picker!" it works really, really well in this epigram. I want to pinch its cheek, so to speak. Uncommon common sense wisdom here too, to boot. :) Gershon

Susan Gentry
Date: 4/16/2018 2:07:00 PM

Thank you! I like that... uncommon common sense. Fits. Appreciate your input always.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2018 6:06:00 PM

so true and so well expressed!! Time for folks to quit fiddling around with bad PICKS!

Susan Gentry
Date: 4/15/2018 7:59:00 AM

Thanks Andrea. Lol you're so right!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/11/2018 1:26:00 PM

I guess some folks carry a lot of emotional baggage so it can be a tough ask Susan:-( hugs Jan xx

Susan Gentry
Date: 4/11/2018 3:31:00 PM

So true. Mine was broke for a long long time.