Broken Mirror

Broken mirror 

In a beautiful moon light night,
	when the moon was fully bright,
I dreamt that a glow sparkling and white,
	getting more power, blinded my sight.
Closer and closer into my pain,
	into my body and into my vein,
stepping on my garden of youth,
	it showed me fruits of wisdom and truth.
Dragging me across a valley of rain,
	showered me softly, washing my sane.
It showed the autumn in a golden leaf,
	hanging from a branch with tears and grief.
Hanging tightly in a stormy night,
	losing the  battle, losing the fight.
Asking and begging for one more chance,
	there was no music, no one to dance.
There is no mirror on my wall,
	spring and summer turned to fall.

Haloo
1/ 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/17/2016 2:45:00 PM
Hi Pashang, once more your heart does sing and your thoughts paint your canvas for us to see. It is strange how we all see things in a different light. The mirror of the mind does see many things and it does show us many different reflections. Maybe we only see our true selves through another's eyes. As always Pashang, an excellent write from your golden pen. A seven is dropped to you as the Raven passes over....Vladislav.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/30/2016 11:00:00 PM
Thanks Vlad... Again, sorry I just noticed that you read my broken mirror. How can I trust my eyes? This Raven can fly by me anytime. Thanks
Date: 12/4/2015 8:22:00 PM
nice pashang
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/16/2016 3:10:00 PM
Thank you Doctor
Date: 10/28/2015 11:20:00 PM
Your thoughts are so beautiful...im falling in love with your work. ^^
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/29/2015 10:30:00 AM
I thought you have an unknown angle. I am not angle ! But I am the most famous unknown person in the world!!!! Read my Samars one and two and let me know.
Date: 10/19/2015 11:25:00 AM
I try to maintain my thoughts only in the present.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/19/2015 5:19:00 PM
My Dear Nayda, you do know that scientifically there is NO present. Keep up the good thoughts.
Date: 10/19/2015 7:32:00 AM
Excellent poem.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/19/2015 10:30:00 AM
Thank you Nayda.... Are you still living every second? Teach me how...
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