Broken Hearts Lie In Your Wake

Broken hearts lie in your wake
From the conquests that you make
From the promises you fake
Broken hearts lie in your wake

Broken love lies at your feet
You entice with tasty treat
Make impossible retreat
Broken love lies at your feet

Broken needs lie at your door
Faces of those wanting more
Those who thought love was in store
Broken needs lie at your door

Broken dreams lie in your hand
Your love trickled through like sand
Every wish seemed noble, grand
Broken dreams lie in your hand

Forgiveness anoints your head
For parts of you that lie dead
For your twisted heart has bled
Forgiveness anoints your head

Eileen Manassian Ghali
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Macfarlane Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 4:48 PM
Excellent write....I been broken many times, but somehow I always put myself back together, I believe you do the same. I see Betty Boop is also your alter-ego...take a peek at "Nun Betty on Trial....will make you smile. Hugs
Manassian Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 12:59 PM
;) Will head there right now, my dear. Yes...we all are broken at times, but we get back together...the cracks show, but hey....no one is complete. Hugs!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 7:48 AM
Sorry you are not at your best, I hope your spirits will soon rise. Hugs Rick. The poem is well expressed.
Manassian Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 9:49 AM
Thank you, RIck. I appreciate the words...
Carroll Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 5:15 AM
Hi Eileen, A heartfelt and moving write, Regards, Ken
Manassian Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 5:33 AM
Thanks, Ken. Glad to have a visit from you.
Trifiatis Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 4:27 AM
Painful truths lie always on our way BUT we to focus must on joys' gains! Beautiful poem that hits the nail on the head!
Manassian Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 5:34 AM
Thank you, my dear poet. Your words are always a balm.....
Vaso Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 11:04 PM
Wow loved this one, If I am the King of sad, you are the Queen!! Well done! :)
Manassian Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 5:35 AM
Hmmmmmmmmmm.......Queen of Sad. That IS a new title. :) Whatever works! Thanks for the post! :)
Jones Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 11:55 AM
Hey you....love your poem...a bit sad....waiting on one of this happy ones!!!!! :-) have a great weekend.......
Manassian Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 5:33 AM
I had a funny one about fish, my dear! :) We roll with the punches....The roller coaster ride of my life! Love you...Thanks for the post.
Ellison Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 10:41 AM
Are you talkin' 'bout little ole ME??? LOL Couldn't be!!! How is my dear Miss Boop today? Love ya sweet lady xoxox
Manassian Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 10:45 AM
Hi Kenny! Betty Boop is doing well! I had a bit of a downer, but I'm slowly coming back! :) Thanks for stopping by with your beautiful words and lovely smile! HUGS XOXOXOXOXO I'm sure you COULD be a heart breaker, Kenny, but you're too nice!
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