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Broken Hearts, Broken Things

This Poem Was Written In Math Class Passing Notes Between My Best Friend Brooke And I...Its Dedicated To John Hauser And Justice Hoffman. The Savages Of Our Hearts. It Starts With Her And Goes To Me. B = Brooke, R = Raiin...Gottit? Awesome. Hope You Enjoy, We Didnt Agree On A Name But This Will Be Posted On Both Hers And Mine [Search Brooke Snyder] Feel Free To Comment! Thanks!! =) xo Always And Forever, Raiin B: Looking out the window, what do you see? Can you see the pain you cause me? R: A smile on my face, can you see through my lies I hide the pain filled tears behind hazel eyes B: The tears fall, are you there to see them All you see are the lies i hide R: Never to know the blood i cry Passing looks between these sighs B: How close we are, changed our ways Being friends hurts the same R: Uncomprehensible, i dont know what it means With every glance, smile, tear, dream and scream B: This pain is real, my love is true We made one, now we are two R: Broken apart, you say never again I scream in my mind, ill never be the same B: You say that you love her, can it be real Have you fallen too fast, your heart did she steal As you did mine in that short time R: Im wandering around, lost without you by my side Scared that with this cruelty my heart will die B: I have no feeling, my blood runs cold The world goes dark, everything is blank R: My frozen heart you have shanked im falling into day dreams now, you ask if im okay and i want to shout out No!! B: Cant you see what you have been doing to me? You are still killing me R: Broken till the end, and i still dont want to be, just really close friends

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Date: 11/21/2009 5:34:00 AM
I love this! Two gifted hearts and minds...Just remember be strong in yourself first and you will see through the lies if they are told.....
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Date: 11/16/2009 12:29:00 PM
This is a great co write i like the title to this. its a great work done by two very good writters your works always good to read Rain always your friend John
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