Broken Hearted Im Left

Sun rode through the window this morning
I got up with a hope of better days to come
leave behind the emotional chaos  around me 
I will not remember you
You who lost all considerations and decided to leave
You are a chameleon lead by selfish bliss
Although  dismal is my future
Iwill have to look for some support
I gave up my job,sold my house to be with you
I want you to go away take all with you
leave nothing behind
You are  faux considerations and imbroglio
For me   world  is grim,you   are blind
Let this night  rid me off this energy
that triggers recurring memory
lwant to,heal my broken heart
Just  disappear in darkness 
I want to see some ray to lead me 
May some power save  me from going astray.
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 6/28/2017 9:56:00 AM
Very dynamically expressed sentiments that touch the heart of the reader. It so vivid and flows like a river flooded by emotions dear, Bawa! By using the expression "I will not remember him" I can safely conclude you are a lady! Wonderful! Welcome again, your presence will beautify further our beautiful poetic family!
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Bawa Talwar
Date: 6/28/2017 11:17:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios for taking the trouble of reading my work. I love your work a lot there was one poem on age I just adored it Plz.read some more of my poems n tell me what is lacking I wish to win a POTD.
Date: 6/28/2017 7:46:00 AM
Liked the poem ... expression of agony ... portrayal of the pains from wounds ... May the sun rays warm you up ...
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Bawa Talwar
Date: 6/28/2017 6:34:00 PM
Thank you Probir I'm glad that u took the trouble to read my work
Date: 6/28/2017 6:21:00 AM
Thank you for taking the trouble ! I highly appreciate it.kindly read other works also
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Date: 6/28/2017 12:19:00 AM
Heart felt. The pain is real, the hurt and heartache hurts. I hope that your pain will be blessed with love and happiness. May your day be filled with great sunshine and all the love you can get. Best wishes friend.
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Bawa Talwar
Date: 9/18/2017 8:27:00 AM
Thank you for your concern . In life things don't fall into your lap. Thank you again
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