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Broken Heart Promises

i was lost in my own world full of pain and lies, you told me i was the only one you wanted,i believed every word you ever told me. i gave you my heart and soul and you used and abused it like it was nothing to you i did all i could to keep you in my life but the harder i tried the more you slipped away from me. i felt like i was not good enough for you anymore, there was a big hole in my heart that felt like it was getting bigger every day ,we never talked any more or did much together i dreamed of the day that you would come to me and whisper to me ive come to you away with me t never return to this place.we can make it if we tried harder to mend what was broken in my heart

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Date: 6/25/2016 10:56:00 PM
CRYSTAL, enjoyed reading your poem, thank you for sharing your thoughts through words. *SKAT*
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Date: 11/10/2011 5:14:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Crystal. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Crystal Hooper
Date: 11/10/2011 5:16:00 AM
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