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Broken Heart

"To live and learn from a broken heart" Bottled up behind a soul.. Running streams of tears that rolled.. Over and over words echo in halls.. Knowing the truth as small trees fall.. Empty words fall on closed ears.. Never hidden in a sea of fears.. Hands of love cup my face.. Enough sadness for me to taste.. Aftermath of a crisis makes me strong.. Rising above from what was wrong.. To live and learn from a broken heart.. "Write It Deep And Dramatic, Please" By Michael J Falotico 9/5/2011

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Summer Uchacz

Date: 9/30/2011 7:24:00 PM

Truly brilliant, and amazing. Keep writing :)

Dinda Minardi

Date: 9/10/2011 11:40:00 AM

This is amazing write, Michael. 'To live and learn from the broken heart', simple yet tons of meanings in it. Luv, Dinda.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/7/2011 4:59:00 PM

thankxx Michael for your sweet comments on so many of my poems luv.. trying to keep up is difficult with so much else of life.. did u see my blog on my son Eric ..Salute to my son..Eric Edward... two days ago? his military photo is in my place for the moment luv.. home in one hour..oh..happy day..your J.G. in exhausted mode..xoxoxoxoxo

George Aul

Date: 9/7/2011 1:44:00 PM

A very touching write......thanks for the comment.........George

Dinda Minardi

Date: 9/6/2011 11:27:00 AM

I love the last stanza. Very deep, Michael. Goodluck in the contest, dear. :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/6/2011 10:20:00 AM

We continue to learn from having our heart's broken and they sure make us stronger in the process Michael.. Love your entry for the contest :) good luck to you.. love Wilma

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/6/2011 10:14:00 AM

Oh shucks, what a deep and heartfelt write this is Michael-- those tears I think are not for naught? You learn from them and you are right, you rise above it... beautiful message of strength after broken love, Michael! hugs!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/5/2011 12:07:00 PM

DO TELL MICHAEL LUV.. THE AFTERMATH OF A CRISIS MAKES ME STRONG TOO.. THIS IS HOW LUV KEEPS TESTING US SO ..OH... GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST.. GLAD U ENJOYED MY SECRET HIDDEN LUV FOR THIS CONTEST TOO .. IMAGINATIONS RUN WILD..HA..J.G. IN PACKING MODE.. HUSBAND IN TIZZY.. TOO MANY SUITCASES..LUV..

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 9/5/2011 10:32:00 AM

Yes, this is deep and dramtic. So many of us can relate to this...been there. Nicely penned piece. Thanks for calling by today. Robert.