Home » Poems » Teresita Cailo » Broken Heart

Broken Heart

.... broken heart that I am, has beset by blemishes though I'm not ashamed; for my shattered pieces myself is to blame. here I breath waiting for the day of my renewal, then back to the role I play; painful past lurking still, but I'm not afraid to take chances to love and be whole once more and be ready to shed a tear of joy !

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/3/2009 1:28:00 PM

Nice shape Teresita, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul

Sue Mason

Date: 4/26/2009 1:22:00 PM

I enjoyed this back in March and here it is again as a "first round survivor" ... smile . Good luck in the contest, Teresita !!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/10/2009 4:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it in the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 4/4/2009 9:03:00 PM

passionate , creative. great you! congrats on a well desevered first round survival. wishing you all the best in the finals. love Leke

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/31/2009 4:48:00 PM

Congratulations Teresita, on this wonderful poem making it to the semi-finals! I love the poem and the form is terrific! Good luck! ~ love, Carrie

Celeste Butler-Mendez

Date: 3/31/2009 6:21:00 AM

Ah, EXCELLENT, dear Teresita. I absolutely lovely. I immediately thought of the ancient poets. BEAUTIFUL and congrats on reaching the first round.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/30/2009 4:34:00 PM

Dear Teresita, I wish YOU could be whole once more I'm sure YOUR Heart will be whole again LOVE YOUR Heart I ask YOU to read my POEM "Broken Heart" Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comment ALWAYS...HG

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/21/2009 4:46:00 PM

Dear Teresita,Congratulations on YOUR POEM "Broken Heart" being Featured this week I can feel the pain of this spectacular POETIC ART I also have a POEM titled Broken Heart it was originally in the shape of a heart split in have it was to long for the soup screen so it is on as a Free Verse Same concept as this Artistic POEM Superb POETIC Genius ALWAYS...HG

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 3/19/2009 7:43:00 PM

Sheer talent putting this form together Congratulations on your featured poem ! Laura :)

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 3/19/2009 9:27:00 AM

Congrats Teresita, on your concrete poem, "Broken Heart" being featured. Vince

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 3/19/2009 6:36:00 AM

Hello Teresita, congratulations on your well-penned poem being featured this week. It's better to have loved and lost than never love at all. Ernilando

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/16/2009 5:47:00 PM

Love the format of this one and the words so touching and fitting to the emotion one suffers when love is lost. Congratulations on being featured. Smiles from Lolita

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/16/2009 5:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar

Date: 3/15/2009 1:51:00 PM

This is so artistic. Love the shape of the poem. Congratulations on having it featured! I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Sue Mason

Date: 3/15/2009 12:33:00 PM

Actualy I think this "Form" should be "Shape" as you've done the perfect half of a heart!! Very well written and congratulations on this being a feature of the week here at the Soup, Teresita!!

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/11/2008 1:22:00 AM

Love the shape Teresita, I guess we all blame ourselves and wait for our day of renewal. I know I have...Raul

Elaine George

Date: 12/7/2008 3:40:00 AM

Sensational emaple of concrete poetry, dear Teresita. Thank you for sharing. lainie

Stacy Stiles

Date: 11/27/2008 6:26:00 AM

AMAZING concrete! I absolutely loved it! I myself cannot seem to master the form, but you seem to have perfectely. Great write, thanks for sharing, Stacy

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 11/20/2008 3:26:00 AM

Beautiful! LOVE the broken heart (well, not literally) but love this poem. clever indeed! Love Kristin

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/19/2008 6:23:00 PM

Wow Teresita! This is truly excellent! A brave, emotional and beautiful ending. Brilliant within it's form! Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/19/2008 5:42:00 PM

Well done, Teresita! The form is perfect fit for the sad content of the poem...broken heart...very clever and touching! ~ Carrie

Constance La France

Date: 11/19/2008 4:33:00 PM

its beautiful.. I love how it is done.. very creative.. and the words are powerful.. well done.. Constance