Broken Down

Broken Down 



The black windows have broken down 
and the walls have collapsed 
and the broken down windows are tainted glass 
and the mirrors are shattered 
broken down, stained and covered in rust and dust 
In it were photographs taken by the sky’s flash 
With lanterns and sunflowers attached to the sun in the clouds in the four corners of the earth’s eye 
The only thing that is to be consumed by the wind is the silence of its breath and the pause before it punched
Creeping up upon our home
Where glory reigned and where we were 
Sheltered from the elements of earth’s  unpredictable ways
Life was simple 
Before the silver clouds and the bullet rain swept away our everything 
Our hearts remain intact though breaking down 
Dying on the inside 
Tummies grumbling with dearth 
And saliva is our desert 
Yet grateful we’ve not seen the end of the line




Marckincia Jean
Free verse
11/12/19

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 11/12/2019 2:33:00 PM
Wow... if this is real... blessings on your house... if not...tis so real... wonderful write. Very full of all the write things... imagery, emotion... Ann
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Marckincia Jean
Date: 11/13/2019 3:50:00 PM
The power of imagination is a wonderful thing. If this were my reality , it would be devastating. Thanks, Ann
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