Broken Dam

Let’s not go,
let’s not reach anywhere.
The toenails have started digging in the earth, 
to make peace with the distress response
of the bruised hunger for transactional surrender.

And the surrogate mother will abandon
the child for the father who had
run away in pursuit of pleasure, like others
sowing his wild oats in rags
unwashable in the milk of mercy.

It has spilled again my full heart.
The pain provokes the stopped clocks,
in the wake of explosions. Unstitched
fissures bleed, I see the ashen face
of a floating wisdom.


SATISH VERMA

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/12/2009 9:37:00 AM
Satish, congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved poem featured this week. Keep on sharing. Ernilando
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Date: 4/8/2009 11:49:00 PM
This is a powerful write... well done. Congratulations on being featured this week. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/8/2009 8:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your feature this week, GB Always, Tyesha"
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Date: 4/8/2009 7:12:00 AM
Very powerful emotions Congratulations on your featured poem well done! Laura :)
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Date: 4/6/2009 12:55:00 PM
Congrats on a well deserved featured write. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/6/2009 7:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your Amazing poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/5/2009 6:33:00 PM
Liked this ,a little dark.Pain spoken of someone done wrong.Where are the days of Chivalry and treating a person as someone to be respected.Enjoyable read.......Jim
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