-broken- city streets

the wretched burnt-orange sun
beats down on my broken car
as she thumps mindlessly through potholes
with windows down
we gaze at clowns
and the derelicts
and the dirty tricks
as they crawl
across the pavement

the lively beauties walk
amongst jackasses and Gemini's
confused hooligans steal
from random pedestrians
to feed addictions
fulfilling a need, though
they mean you no harm, indeed
despite their transgressions

we're all devoured
by our own deceptions
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Duncan Avatar
June 6, 2026 at 10:07 PM
But the hooligans did mean harm. Good poem tho :)
HAYNES Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 8:33 PM
Really enjoy your truths/ excellent writing
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