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Broken Angle

A punishment… So sweetly sickening it saddens me, Oh, beautiful angle! Was it truly your time? The answer I’m not quite sure, You lay there damaged, Like a broken wind chime, No song to sing no more. Your severed wings bent so oddly, Shattered glass glitters in the sun around you, The liquid that once held you safe, Does naught but drown you? Be careful! The edges of your smashed dome, They might cut you! Even more than the lying tongues of men. Was your fall as glorious as Icarus had promised? Or was it only a serpent’s call? You might regret for eternity.

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Date: 5/16/2023 6:22:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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