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the emerald of our love seemed so pure you were the Cullinan of my heart yet, even graphite has no cure for curing was no start our love splintering on your part crumbling broken! it’s gone it was sold you were the one so fragile, yet so cold my diamond turned to graphite there was no place in your mould I found a black diamond… reflected no light -the Cullinan Diamond was the world's biggest diamond discovered at the time 3100 carats-

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Date: 8/16/2016 8:32:00 AM
Congrats well done
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Date: 8/16/2016 8:35:00 AM
Thank you Wendy
Date: 8/16/2016 7:24:00 AM
As I keenly read your poem, I realized that the structuring of your poem goes hand in hand with every emotion expressed in every line.... Congrats James, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 8/16/2016 8:35:00 AM
"You are very perceptive and very correct it ads to the overall effect. Thanks for the visit!"
Date: 8/13/2016 1:46:00 PM
Congrats!!!...well done James my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/15/2016 1:14:00 AM
Thank you ^WW^!
Date: 8/13/2016 9:52:00 AM
well done congrats xxx
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Date: 8/13/2016 11:52:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 8/12/2016 7:02:00 PM
Very good. Love the last line. Congrats! :-)
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Date: 8/13/2016 11:53:00 AM
Thank you Tom
Date: 8/12/2016 6:32:00 PM
Congratulations James on the placement of the contest
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Date: 8/13/2016 11:53:00 AM
Thank you Nayda!
Date: 8/12/2016 4:48:00 PM
Dropping back with congrats James:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/12/2016 4:42:00 PM
Hi James, Good take on the contest theme. Nice form as well. Congratulations on your 3rd place win:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/13/2016 11:52:00 AM
O thank you so much Alexis
Date: 3/31/2016 8:23:00 PM
James, I like the format and the flow. LINDA
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Just James
Date: 4/10/2016 1:10:00 PM
Tx Linda
Date: 3/31/2016 9:07:00 AM
A metaphorical gem, James.
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Date: 3/31/2016 1:58:00 PM
tx !
Date: 3/31/2016 7:34:00 AM
Deep and sad imagery but this is a 'gem' of a poem James and I love the form you used:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/31/2016 7:44:00 AM
thank you... the form adds so much to the overall effect

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