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Broken

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Broken

~Suicidal Night~

I sit alone in the dark
In the dark I sit alone
Nobody sees me
I see nobody

Flowers, above
My eyes have darkened to a color never seen before
Forever closed!
 
It Rains!
It Rains!

In this room, I've drowned too many times
I remember cascades of water under my eyes
My satin sheets wrinkle and cold
I die and die every night
No one sees the pain that kills me every day
Wounds that reach 6 feet deep

Lucid demons
Bleeding wrist
Scary dreams
My mind is screaming
---
Incomplete'
Torn'
Broken-
Is how I live

I'm alone-
No one's around.
My body's like a coffin
Stiff in my own home.

~A Poet Destroyer Collaboration~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 4/25/2017 12:29:00 PM
This poem really touched my heart, and I loved it. Keep writing! :)
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Date: 3/25/2017 7:22:00 AM
I love this write !! This happens too much in this world.. Not enough Hugs to go around I guess..
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Date: 3/20/2017 3:18:00 PM
WOW! GREAT JOB WITH THIS ONE
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Date: 2/16/2017 4:53:00 PM
I love your poem.
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Date: 11/27/2016 1:24:00 PM
Fix it up With Glue or tape Applied with love Not mouth agape
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Date: 10/21/2016 5:14:00 AM
I liked this poem, it touched my soul. Thank you for sharing it
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Date: 10/2/2016 12:04:00 AM
Beautiful.
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Date: 7/20/2016 11:07:00 PM
Very sad poem...but good...and I feel for you. Loneliness is the pits!
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Date: 7/13/2016 8:45:00 AM
Hi Skat A . Loved this , felt so bad but good. Yep it's an ooutcry. It MUST be different now
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Date: 7/1/2016 12:49:00 PM
Excellent my dear -just short enough for me to read
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Date: 6/10/2016 7:46:00 AM
Skat A... Thank you for your comments. (did I feel a sense of a Michigan? ).
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Date: 5/28/2016 6:58:00 AM
Every word, every line I can relate to. The times of despair, I was there. I am here and writing, and I hear you.
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Date: 5/27/2016 2:21:00 AM
No words (my comments) can do your poem justice. So now more words...apart from this is a sad (euphemism) story and a brilliant expression of it.
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Date: 5/15/2016 7:42:00 PM
oh wow, this really touched me, I felt every word and felt your pain as it sounds just like me and I have a couple of poems I am posting soon about my lonlienss and pain. you are a very deep and emotional person and this poem is amazing. you have so much talent combined with an exceptional ability to express emotion. love this!!!
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Date: 5/13/2016 9:10:00 AM
SKAT, A brilliant write. Enjoyed every word . If u don't mind pls tell me little about ur diet. I will definitely try to follow ur diet to write few lines like u. Loved entire poem..........//:) hugs
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Date: 5/8/2016 3:03:00 PM
Sounds like my life, sure we never met? lol, your words are deep and I'm sure from the heart, I do look forward to reading all of your poems, Best wishes Jeffrey
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Date: 5/4/2016 8:19:00 PM
Wonderful!
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Date: 4/30/2016 12:34:00 AM
Lovely, this is deep .
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Date: 4/26/2016 5:52:00 PM
Hello my friend. Sobering. Forces one to pause and be still. Bless you.
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Date: 4/20/2016 8:43:00 PM
This is deep . Jus stop by yo page to show some love
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Date: 4/8/2016 6:14:00 PM
I feel this in my soul. Wonderful. I rarely write but when I do it's almost always through depression or joy. I love your words. I felt your pain. I read your words alone but felt your company while reading them. Thank you.
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Date: 3/16/2016 3:07:00 AM
Very well executed..Great work with you and Poet.
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Date: 2/21/2016 7:58:00 PM
Omg!! So sad and so beautiful, I literally started to cry to this! Amazing job!
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Date: 2/9/2016 6:15:00 PM
Wow, that sounds like death is crushing. I relate. Very focused and visual.
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Date: 1/30/2016 8:34:00 PM
The power of well-chosen words is not to be underestimated. Disbelievers need only read this incredible poem for proof. 'Tis an unforgettable, shiver-generating composition. Congratulations, SKAT.
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