Broken

I was broken once 
But now I'm not 
I Pray for my innocence 
Of now I'm not
He followed me there
And I stood not 
He took me down 
And broke my soul
He left me there to rot
So cold the river runs
I float lightly on the current
All I seek now is my salvation

forgivenesstimememedramatic verse

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Duke Beaufort

March 23, 2017 at 5:59 PM

And you shall have it. I am amazed at the pain you have been through. I do like and appreciate your poetry. It is a gift for us all. Thank-you. I will read them all as you can see, I am making slow but steady progress. I have to go to our nation's capital next week. But I will be back after that and continue. You are a beautiful spirit.

Skat A

May 18, 2015 at 1:52 PM

DEBBIE, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love

Andrea Dietrich

August 14, 2013 at 11:23 PM

I like sad poems, Debbie. This one was very interesting and filled with feeling. gosh, it does not relate to the last poem I read about the lost love, does it?

Debbie Duncan

August 15, 2013 at 1:46 AM

Nope it is not related to my lost love ;}

Robert Pettit

February 18, 2011 at 4:36 PM

Simply worded, and very descriptive. Most of the time, you don't need a lot of words to express good ideas.

Poet Destroyer A

February 18, 2011 at 3:47 PM

a deep lovely write, floating on the current till you are to float onto a stopping point where you know you'll be happy, enjoyed your write,..p.d.

Michael J. Falotico

February 18, 2011 at 3:02 PM

And that my dear will come in time... In simple words "Life hands us crap" but its what we do with it and who we become is the test.. Just my thoughts..

Broken

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment

Member Area

Soup Social

Member Poems

Member Poets

Famous Poems

Famous Poets

Poetry Resources