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I love this, Aurore; a poem which touches the heart. In life I have learned that one must never throw in the towel; somehow we'll cope and survive. ~ Regards, my friend // paul

Ah, tear drop fell xo

Aurore this made me emotional….so very moving and so very beautiful! I love the line “shared his little heart with me” such sweetness in that line! Deb x

This is quirky and impactful. You told a lifetime in a few seconds. Well done.

There is a beat or maybe offbeat to your unique poetry, bohemian natured perhaps. The words stunning to feel your life, Aurore. Sad but true, all for a greater reason. Enjoyed your experience, ~Anaya

This is such a moving write. The way you’ve written this and how it flows so seamlessly with excellent storytelling truly touched my heart. Love this. And a kind hand and gesture could do wonders, such beautiful stories need to be read and told more often. Soul warming really

Your imagery and straight-forward approach is engaging and goes straight to the heart of the reader. The journey is painful, but your close brings a joy to my heart. Thanks for sharing the good side of humanity in a world filled with evil deeds. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

A powerful emotion envelopes the reader--for every line conveys the pain of being without basics of life. I like the ending that conveys--one can overcome it all and step into a better tomorrow. So well done!

Your words run me through a gauntlet of emotions. I shed tears for the hardship and struggle but want to stand up and cheer for the last two lines. A powerful poem.

Your poem is a profound masterpiece that captivates my senses. Although I have only delved into this particular piece, its essence emanates an unparalleled depth, leaving an indelible impression upon my soul. Your words possess a remarkable ability to transport me to a world of profound emotions and experiences, urging me to eagerly anticipate your future creations. Thanks for your comment on my page

i've only read this one, but immediately it shows me a unique, intense and impactful writer - keep writing and posting!

such a touching piece, you brought tears to my eyes Aurore. hugs jan x

Sad story you have told in poetic form. We as the average person has no idea of how many people suffer like this in a country that has so much to offer. Thanks for sharing this one with us and your visit to my page. Sara

So sweet. God bless you. Love, Gina