Broken

Quote “A broken heart is just the growing pains necessary so that you can love more completely when the real thing comes along.” – J.S.B. Morse 


Beneath the shattered fragments, hope remains,
Rekindling love's embers through the pain,
Open your heart, let trust be your guide,
Keeping faith alive, side by side,
Embrace the pieces, for they hold dreams untold,
Never forget the promises of old.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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La France Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 12:12 AM
Jay, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, I like the quote too, Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 9:26 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful Acrostic write. I enjoyed reading it. Have a great day.............
Alex Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 9:47 PM
A great acrostic on this strong theme. Congratulations!
George Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 9:37 PM
Cingratulations dear Jay on your win on this poem of hope and resilience !
George Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 10:27 PM
A great acrostic giving so much of hope even in brokeness! Love it for the beautiful message it gives !
Edmonds  Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 2:31 AM
A wonderful Acrostic Jay, a good message for the broken hearted too… Belle
Baker Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 9:02 PM
Lovely Acrostic poetry, Jay. Good message to share with us. Have agreat week, my friend. Bill
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 10:58 AM
wonderful job of it, jay. you should put a quote above it. Constance likes quotes and usually places higher those who use quotes and/or pictures too.
Andresen Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 10:43 AM
- ... sad ... when every promise is broken ... lovely written, Jay :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
Volumes Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 9:52 AM
Jay this is a wonderful Acrostic on the subject broken. BOL in the contest.
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