Broken

i feel the pierce of each tiny shard wafting through air as that glass shatters in echoes against walls my blood splatters the same as it falls down i am fine...just musing...

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Arturo Michael

Date: 1/16/2020 11:07:00 AM

Artistic in many ways...in the play of words...nice vibes

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/16/2020 11:07:00 AM

Thank you so much Arturo... hugs

Running Wolves

Date: 1/15/2020 9:20:00 AM

Ouch this is creepy good... Love it.. Even I walk on the dark side now and then Bwahahahaha

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/15/2020 10:20:00 AM

lol... thank you Robert... if creepy is good then count me in...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/14/2020 1:20:00 PM

Sandra, your poem made me think of what it must be like during the recent air strikes in the Middle East. Also, when Hurricane Matthew hit my area, I wrapped myself in a comforter (even though it was hot outside) for fear shards of window glass would cut me. Sometimes those shards can be words that hurt us too. Very nice work!

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/14/2020 7:29:00 PM

Thank you Carolyn...i cannot imagine living in a war zone like that...i had that same fear as you when we had a tornado come through late one night...an f5 in an area that never gets them...and a rare night one...i remember the fear and hiding with the kids on the stair case huddled under a thick blanket for the same reason you did... words can damage more so i think because a surface wound will heal and eventually the scar fade but the words will echo forever in a mind... hugs

Chris Green

Date: 1/14/2020 1:19:00 PM

Love your poem and your note at the bottom. From frown to smile that fast. : ) Really Sandy, your words ache because your talent to express emotions is so strong. Beautifully done.

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/14/2020 7:24:00 PM

Thank you Chris...i guess i can pick emotions out of my mind like flowers from a field...