Broken '07

What dreams, these I've taken?
What lives, these I'm living?
You dream, I hope.
You laugh, I think.
You need, I want.
Want more? What more?
Giving, receiving,
Needing, demanding,
Sleeping, praying.
Where are you?
Where is that love we shared?
Those cavities we created?
There is no answer.
Give thee thy daily bread.
In giving and repenting,
Shall I be heard?
Lords they hear, and Gods give
[Their God’s gifts]
These words, not life, not love.
Or lovers to each other.
Not anything.
Not yours, not mine.
Not you, nor me.

Destined paths, paths destined.
They inter-twine and bend before breaking.
Do you feel those thorns around you?
Imbedded pain so deep.
I heard crying.
Before and after,
And many times that fell between.
And so on to forgiving.
Hating, spite,
And spiteful hatred.
Hateful and revenging.
Remorseful and repenting.
Show no reward.
That we served time,
And that our time was served.
Or how hungry I am feeling.
How swollen are my breasts.
How much do you know of love?
Of giving breath into new life?
You’ll know nothing more,
And I’ll know much less.
Leaving only those sweet words,
Upon your dying breath:
‘I loved someone, once.’
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Guzzi Avatar
May 22, 2009 at 5:56 AM
Wonderful...please turn on soup mail..I can't tell you too much here...the verse would be well served by line breaks. Light & Love
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December 27, 2008 at 9:59 AM
Naomi - Congratulations on your feature this week! Wishing you a Happy & Healthy New Year. Peace always, John
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December 23, 2008 at 6:01 PM
Congratulations Naomi on this heartfelt poem "Broken '07" being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince
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December 22, 2008 at 9:23 PM
Congrats on being featured this week, Happy Holidays...Raul
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December 21, 2008 at 7:19 PM
Naoni - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week – Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ
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December 21, 2008 at 5:47 PM
So sad, so full of deep feelings, and so well written! congratulations on being featured this week...well deserved! ~ Carrie Happy Holidays!
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December 21, 2008 at 5:08 PM
Congrats on being featured.
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December 21, 2008 at 4:03 PM
Congratulations on your featured write of the week! Warmest wishes for a beautiful holiday! Love, Shar
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December 21, 2008 at 2:39 PM
Some interesting questions to ponder. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Keep on writing. Karen
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December 9, 2008 at 5:21 AM
You certainly have a way of tugging at the heart strings... '...bend before breaking,' and your devastating final three lines. For your grief, if it be real... God bless. Keith
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