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Broken - Haiku

Soft crunch, falling back Watching the heat in shock waves Pins hold me together.

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Date: 1/17/2009 10:27:00 AM
Dear Judith, congratulations on your featured poem of the week. Love and peace, Lainie
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Date: 1/14/2009 3:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week...Raul
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Date: 1/13/2009 5:46:00 AM
Yes! One can really feel those "pins"...heat! Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
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Date: 1/12/2009 6:03:00 PM
Congratulations Judith, on your haiku being featured. Vince
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Date: 1/12/2009 5:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Judith. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/11/2009 10:29:00 PM
Thank you so much for stopping by Carrie, Shar, Karen and Trudy. I'm always pleasantly surprised to find my poetry featured. And delighted with your comments. Thank you ~J~
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Date: 1/11/2009 2:01:00 PM
Well done, thought provoking! Congratulations on being featured with this haiku. ~Carrie
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Date: 1/11/2009 1:27:00 PM
Congratulations Judith on your amazing poetry being featured this week! Not a happy haiku, but I see it is from way back. Hope all is well! Love, Shar
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Date: 1/11/2009 12:22:00 PM
Judith, I just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 1/11/2009 10:47:00 AM
Hey Hey, featured and a finalist! Way to go! Good luck!~Tru~
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