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Brisbane Gal - a Bit Bawdy

I’m told of a gal in faraway Brisbane Whose abilities could drive a man insane She had a special gift While giving him a lift Few thought her tricks were completely inhumane
Written October 19, 2022

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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 10/21/2022 10:52:00 AM
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Oh goodness.. This is good one. Made me smile. Cheers Hankins
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/21/2022 11:16:00 AM
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Well, thanks, Paghunda. It is good to know that you enjoyed it, and I appreciate your thoughtful comment.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/21/2022 1:59:00 AM
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This is bawdy, and bawdy is good-y.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/21/2022 8:59:00 AM
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Glad you enjoyed it, Caren.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/20/2022 12:51:00 PM
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AHA, this is your bawdy one. I like it, but let's see even bawdier. haha!!!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/20/2022 1:28:00 PM
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Oh well, Andrea, I do have a certain reputation to keep up! Why don't you write a bawdy one????
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 10/20/2022 8:19:00 AM
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It sounds as if she might compare to a legend of song, "Mary Anne With the Shaky Hand". Thanks L Milton
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 10/20/2022 12:56:00 PM
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That's a shame L Milton. It's a really good The Who song. Also a bit bawdy, but it turns out Mary Anne is just a shaky one handed drummer.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/20/2022 11:00:00 AM
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I'm not familiar with that song, Jeff. Perhaps.
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Terry Flood
Date: 10/20/2022 8:14:00 AM
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The mind boggles, Milt. The expression ‘gift’ opens the mind to numerous possibilities… most of them ‘X’ rated. Witty Limerick. ;-)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/20/2022 11:01:00 AM
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Indeed! I let every reader decide how they want to interpret it.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/20/2022 3:20:00 AM
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Milt, ha ha, a funny one!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/20/2022 8:06:00 AM
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Glad you go a kick out of it, Tania.
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/19/2022 5:49:00 PM
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Lol your limerick reflects such a lady Milton...I am afraid to ask what that was? lol.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/19/2022 7:40:00 PM
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You're best not to ask, Michael. It's totally fiction, you know. I've never even been to Brisbane!

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