Kash Poet Poet Pantoum

Bring the Sky Nearer To Me

Bring the sky nearer to me
give me back the childhood days,
so near to me that I can see
a rainbow's kiss with sunrays!


Give me back the childhood days
those wonder eyes to see in sky,
a rainbow's kiss with sunrays
butterfly dreams free to fly!


Those wonder eyes to see in sky
a twilight's birth with morning dream,
butterfly dreams free to fly
like childhood dawn's first sun beam!


A twilight's birth with morning dream
so near to me that I can see,
like childhood dawn's first sun beam
bring the sky nearer to me!

© kashinath karmakar
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Placement:5th; (March 2011)

Contest:Back to Back

Sponsor:Paula Swanson

By:kashinath karmakar (15th March 2011)

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Carol Sunshine Brown November 17, 2011 at 6:13 AM Congratulations on your win in Moses' "Give Me Your Best Shot" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta November 14, 2011 at 6:20 AM Congratulations on the win in the contest of John Freeman, kash

Nette Onclaud November 14, 2011 at 1:05 AM ohhh, totally taken by this, kashi .. super congrats on your top, sweet win.. :) huggs!

Joyce Johnson November 13, 2011 at 7:42 PM Congratulations on your third place win. Love, Joyce

Cory Long November 13, 2011 at 5:43 PM i love the second verse congrats on your win int he contest. cory

John Freeman November 13, 2011 at 5:25 PM Wonderful idea in the way you expressed your mesage in this gem, Kash, Congratulations on a worthy third. Agape, Moses

Caryl Muzzey July 16, 2011 at 9:15 AM Congratulations Kashinath on your win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

Nette Onclaud July 14, 2011 at 8:36 AM oh kashi, best congrats on your fine win, ..:) huggs!

John Freeman July 14, 2011 at 8:01 AM Kashinath, Congratulations on your poem's honored position. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 14, 2011 at 5:34 AM Congrats Kash on your HM with these awesome words my friend..enjoy very special honor for excellence .. and creativity always luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown July 14, 2011 at 5:20 AM Congratulations Kashinath on your win in the "A Old Or New" contest sponsored by Brian Strand. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song May 20, 2011 at 1:19 AM A Back to Back win with buttery couplets!! This is only 5th? Wow...this is very well done. Gwendolen

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 24, 2011 at 11:09 PM This is very cool, Kashinath & you brought the simplicity of childhood dreams here, that's really nice :) enjoyed reading this-- me thinks I need to try writing one soon-- wonderful first attempt at pantuom-- congrats on your win!

Andrea Dietrich March 28, 2011 at 10:45 PM Is this the one you mean, Kash. Just saw your note. No, this one completely got by me. I used to be able to keep up on all of them but sometimes they slip by me! I'm very happy to see that you did well with this one. Congatulations,Kashinath. I am trying to think what to enter in the next Soup contest before April 1 deadline. that is what I hope to do now before midnight and bed!! Luv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown March 21, 2011 at 10:22 AM A heartfelt congratulations to you Kashinath for your win in Paula's contest "Back To Back". Love, Carol

Caryl Muzzey March 21, 2011 at 7:54 AM A wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your fifth place win. Caryl

Nette Onclaud March 20, 2011 at 9:42 AM ...of sugary childhood memories, kashi! whoot... didn;t join this contest, so didn't realize you made it! CONGRTAS big time! :) huggs, nette

Gwendolen Song March 19, 2011 at 2:29 PM This is such a sweet poem and reminds me of swinging in my back yard and trying to touch the sky with my tippie toes! Nice pantoum. Gwendolen

Harry Horsman March 19, 2011 at 12:42 AM Another wonderful nostalgia Pantoum, wonderful deep and awesome. congrats, Harry

Tahera Mannan March 18, 2011 at 8:21 PM Many warm congrats for this win dear Kashi.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 18, 2011 at 3:43 PM Congrats Kashinath on your wonderful win in Paula's Pantoum contest ..a vibrant write my friend.. enjoy with luv..

Carrie Richards March 18, 2011 at 12:45 PM I love this so much Kashinath....wishing we could bring back that childhood sky...the sense of well-being, and innocence...if only we could. Just lovely sentiments throughout this beauty! Love, Carrie

John Freeman March 18, 2011 at 11:19 AM An awesome job my Man Kashinath, great to see you near the top. Congratulations on your worthy fifth place victory. Enjoy! Agape, Moses SORRY

Joe Maverick March 18, 2011 at 12:44 AM Enjoyed this piece Kashinath, you know those days are out there still! being enjoyed by children of new generations at least the ones fortunate enough to have stable homelife's.

Wilma Neels March 16, 2011 at 11:21 AM Kash, you brought so much beauty out in this piece of yours, I just love your ending, so full of hope.. good luck if for a contest, sorry I've been so quiet and thank you for always commenting on my work ;) Wilma

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