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Bring the Sky Nearer To Me

Bring the sky nearer to me give me back the childhood days, so near to me that I can see a rainbow's kiss with sunrays! Give me back the childhood days those wonder eyes to see in sky, a rainbow's kiss with sunrays butterfly dreams free to fly! Those wonder eyes to see in sky a twilight's birth with morning dream, butterfly dreams free to fly like childhood dawn's first sun beam! A twilight's birth with morning dream so near to me that I can see, like childhood dawn's first sun beam bring the sky nearer to me! © kashinath karmakar ======================= Placement:5th; (March 2011) Contest:Back to Back Sponsor:Paula Swanson By:kashinath karmakar (15th March 2011)

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Date: 11/17/2011 6:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Moses' "Give Me Your Best Shot" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/14/2011 6:20:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of John Freeman, kash
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Date: 11/14/2011 1:05:00 AM
ohhh, totally taken by this, kashi .. super congrats on your top, sweet win.. :) huggs!
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Date: 11/13/2011 7:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your third place win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/13/2011 5:43:00 PM
i love the second verse congrats on your win int he contest. cory
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Date: 11/13/2011 5:25:00 PM
Wonderful idea in the way you expressed your mesage in this gem, Kash, Congratulations on a worthy third. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/16/2011 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations Kashinath on your win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 7/14/2011 8:36:00 AM
oh kashi, best congrats on your fine win, ..:) huggs!
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Date: 7/14/2011 8:01:00 AM
Kashinath, Congratulations on your poem's honored position. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/14/2011 5:34:00 AM
Congrats Kash on your HM with these awesome words my friend..enjoy very special honor for excellence .. and creativity always luv..
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Date: 7/14/2011 5:20:00 AM
Congratulations Kashinath on your win in the "A Old Or New" contest sponsored by Brian Strand. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/20/2011 1:19:00 AM
A Back to Back win with buttery couplets!! This is only 5th? Wow...this is very well done. Gwendolen
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Date: 4/24/2011 11:09:00 PM
This is very cool, Kashinath & you brought the simplicity of childhood dreams here, that's really nice :) enjoyed reading this-- me thinks I need to try writing one soon-- wonderful first attempt at pantuom-- congrats on your win!
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Date: 3/28/2011 10:45:00 PM
Is this the one you mean, Kash. Just saw your note. No, this one completely got by me. I used to be able to keep up on all of them but sometimes they slip by me! I'm very happy to see that you did well with this one. Congatulations,Kashinath. I am trying to think what to enter in the next Soup contest before April 1 deadline. that is what I hope to do now before midnight and bed!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/21/2011 10:22:00 AM
A heartfelt congratulations to you Kashinath for your win in Paula's contest "Back To Back". Love, Carol
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Date: 3/21/2011 7:54:00 AM
A wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your fifth place win. Caryl
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Date: 3/20/2011 9:42:00 AM
...of sugary childhood memories, kashi! whoot... didn;t join this contest, so didn't realize you made it! CONGRTAS big time! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/19/2011 2:29:00 PM
This is such a sweet poem and reminds me of swinging in my back yard and trying to touch the sky with my tippie toes! Nice pantoum. Gwendolen
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Date: 3/19/2011 12:42:00 AM
Another wonderful nostalgia Pantoum, wonderful deep and awesome. congrats, Harry
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Date: 3/18/2011 8:21:00 PM
Many warm congrats for this win dear Kashi.
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Date: 3/18/2011 3:43:00 PM
Congrats Kashinath on your wonderful win in Paula's Pantoum contest ..a vibrant write my friend.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 3/18/2011 12:45:00 PM
I love this so much Kashinath....wishing we could bring back that childhood sky...the sense of well-being, and innocence...if only we could. Just lovely sentiments throughout this beauty! Love, Carrie
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Date: 3/18/2011 11:19:00 AM
An awesome job my Man Kashinath, great to see you near the top. Congratulations on your worthy fifth place victory. Enjoy! Agape, Moses SORRY
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Date: 3/18/2011 12:44:00 AM
Enjoyed this piece Kashinath, you know those days are out there still! being enjoyed by children of new generations at least the ones fortunate enough to have stable homelife's.
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Date: 3/16/2011 11:21:00 AM
Kash, you brought so much beauty out in this piece of yours, I just love your ending, so full of hope.. good luck if for a contest, sorry I've been so quiet and thank you for always commenting on my work ;) Wilma
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