Bring Me Home

What I'd like to give you, is an ounce of my perfume
Sharing like we use too, we never took or did presume.
Sisters growing together, our bond very tight,
Though when little children, had the odd minor fight.

Forward to that day when your beauty fell asleep
Family hearts broken, many tears we all did weep.
Losing you, was the hardest thing, I've had too bear
Mourning, grieving deeply, wailing cries of despair.

Time went by people told me, dreams they had of you
I had no visitation dreams, which left me feeling blue.
The evening of my birthday, alone in the back room
Suddenly I smelt, the aroma of your perfume.

Walking around searching, trying to find out where
Hoping and wanting, I would find you standing there.
My cousin who was visiting, strolled into the room
That exact moment, gone was your scented bloom.

I asked if he could smell anything, within the room air
"No" came his puzzled reply "nothing anywhere"
Was it my imagination? or a subconscious wish?
This was the first birthday, without my little sis.

I truly believe, you was there, and sent me a sign
Your birthday gift telling me, your never far behind.
Warming glows of inner peace, I no longer felt alone
Together we'll be again, when God calls to bring me home.


Bring Me Home Poetry Contest

Sponsor  Mystic Rose Rose

Written   03.10.21

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 11/1/2021 12:01:00 PM
Beautifully penned Emilia, so sorry about your loss but you've the comfort of being united again in heaven one day. Such lovely rhyme and flow with good imagery too. Take care, blessings,Gordon
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Emilia James
Date: 11/2/2021 7:54:00 AM
Thank you Gordon for your kind words and for reading. Take care. Emilia : )
Date: 10/11/2021 3:37:00 PM
Heartiest congratulations on the win! Fathoms the quagmire of divinity with, "Together we'll be again, when God calls to bring me home!"
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Emilia James
Date: 10/12/2021 7:44:00 AM
Thank you very much Silpka. Emilia.
Date: 10/6/2021 8:25:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, making me nostalgic and thankful of sibling-bonding, blessed by the Lord. God bless you.
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Emilia James
Date: 10/12/2021 7:41:00 AM
Thank you Beata, yes make the most of every minute you have with them. Emilia.
Date: 10/5/2021 3:50:00 PM
Hello Emilia ... a sad time but a wonderful tribute for remembrance and how you grow up with your sister - thank you Emilia - Lindsay
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Emilia James
Date: 10/12/2021 7:39:00 AM
Thank you so much Lindsay. Would write more about her but it's still very painful to be honest. Emilia.
Date: 10/4/2021 6:10:00 PM
A very touching poem scented with sorrow and joy, congrats on your win dear Emilia
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Emilia James
Date: 10/12/2021 7:34:00 AM
Thank you Mystic Rose Rose and thank you for your contest. Emilia.
Date: 10/4/2021 5:09:00 PM
So sad Emilia, is this true?, if so I'm sorry for your loss. Congrats on your win. Tom
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Emilia James
Date: 10/12/2021 7:31:00 AM
Thank you Tom. Yes, it is all true. Have lost two sisters and another sibling was lost during pregnancy. Is just myself and one younger sister left. Emilia.
Date: 10/3/2021 4:02:00 PM
That's so sad.hope it's not true.good luck in comp.i always call my sister sis.take care.,:-)
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Date: 10/12/2021 7:24:00 AM
Thank you Simon, Hope you have been keeping well. Emilia : )
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