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Bring It On

Eckhart Tolle says, "Life will give you whatever experience is most helpful for the evolution of your consciousness." ... To this, I say, bring it on Throw everything at me, the night of your own right, And as sure as there is light, I will live, push, cry, and fight If the words roll away into the winds of woe When your eyes no longer burn in my vicious glow, I will pull through without, within Taking all the impact in Lost will be my promised purpose, In the deepest prisons cold, Jeers of delinquent devils shout, "Out with mercy! Out with fight! Out with all the hope of light! Into the fray, vicious and gay, Stab their souls in false array, Cut their tongues of honeyed hope, Crack their joyous jaws and mope, Beat their battled courage raw, Reduce them to tears-commit them to flaw!" To this, I say, bring it on Drag me to the prisons that quiver, Into the hell that encompasses the strongest of mind If treasures are fables, then grime I shall find And I shall mold the muck into wings of luck Descending the cliffs of the damned I will light the wick in my world With the flame of all determination unfurled! In the cries of goodbyes I will lift mine eyes, Across the seas of delusion, Sing-song, supple voices cry, "Welcome to dream, Welcome to relief, Welcome to mastered misery supreme! Syrupy promises, in smiles we roam, And make sugared falsehood our hanus home! Take their wearied souls and breathe, In the softest fumes of darkest retreat, Drain their sorrows in the booze of blood, Take their children and drown them in mud!" To this, I say, bring it on! Lure me into your seas of wrath, Poisoned with liars promising heaven If misery be my friend, let her lend a hand, And lift those hopeless children from the sand Riding the waves that were once dreams-now life, I will let myself drown at the expense of their ascension! You will not take our next generation! I rise in the gorgeous eyes of your frenzied surprise, I make love to the promise that even the weak survive As certain as there is love, I will always battle with the tiger eye and the charm of a dove And the souls will remember the days of suffering, Giving into drifting doubt: "Remember our slaving curse tonight, Our God brings death as sure as night, Weakly we beg you to surrender, right or wrong... We cannot sing along if we don't belong..." Moan and groan, my flock, till the break of dawn Still to this day, and always, I will pray, bleeding, heaving and graized... Bring it on...

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Date: 2/19/2015 8:46:00 PM
This poem reminds me of the American civil war, not that I've been there. Good job. Keep writing -JT
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/19/2015 8:53:00 PM
Thanks JT, for the sweet support! I definitely will continue writing! I need to go read more your work! ~Laura
Date: 2/17/2015 9:48:00 AM
What a battle cry, Laura. A warrior woman posses her own beauty and charm. This is an intense piece...You are well acquainted with passion. "Battle with tiger eye and the charm of a dove." A winning combination....Thanks for your visit to my latest.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/17/2015 2:17:00 PM
Thanks Eileen! Unfortunately my computer is running really slow, but I will try and read more of your work later on today. Thanks for the kind words! ~Laura
Date: 2/17/2015 3:15:00 AM
You've never been more beautiful to me Laura...you've never been so fanatical for the freedom of your purest love! Wow, what a wave of fearless warfare! You finish this poem on the wings of glory, with a battle just begun. "Anderson I shall mold the muck into wings of luck...Drain their sorrows in the booze of blood...I will pray, bleeding, heaving and graized, bring it on!" This is why I have love for you Laura...J.A.B.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/17/2015 2:26:00 PM
Aw, thanks Justin. The feeling is mutual. In this poem, I inordinately felt like it was only the beginning of a piece-that something else was missing.. though I wanted it to end with an enduring flair. I tried to implement some of the personalities in this world that do prey on our endurance and seek to drag them in their traps that they have only made for themselves. I'm really happy you like those lines..thanks again for your loving support. Means a lot!~Laura

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